Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely image and nice presentation, Wendy.
-You wrote a good poem about it with
effective nature imagery and alliteration.
-The opening word gets our attention
so we see the beauty of the blossom
and hear the "bees buzz."
-A very good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Pam. A great encouragement.
Wendy

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Jul-2023

You are very welcome, Wendy.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Impressive alliteration of all five words. Perfect subtitle too. I know bees are attracted by the smell and I'm guessing the color too. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for reviewing this tiny one, and also for your good wishes.
Wendy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your 2-4-2 done all with B-words. Hooray for blossoms and busy bees! I like the cosmos flower which is always so easygoing and without bees, we'd have no food! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you. Without any syllables left to say it, I hoped people would think about the role and significance of bees. Thanks for the good wishes too.
Wendy

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Excellent alliteration. It makes the bees come to life as it read aloud. They seem so happy to see the blossom. Yum. The work will be worth the effort.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you for this very nice review, and also for the good wishes!
Wendy

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Wendy, I like thalliteration in this poem. It works well. The soft colors and your well-chosen words give your poem a soft flowery essence.
Good luck in the contest, Wendy.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Cindy. That?s a thoughtful and lovely review.
Wendy

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Good use of alliteration with all five words starting with the letter "B".

Nature has its own unique ways such as bees pollinating flowers while those same blooms feed the bees.

Nature seems to fit together in most cases like a neatly designed grand scheme.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you, Brett. Yes, mutual benefit, and perfect design.
Wendy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

It is always a good idea with these ultra short pieces Defined by syllable count, to have some other poetic device involved. You have chosen yo alliteration, appropriately on the letter B. Good idea.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thanks so much. This tiny one gives readers a break from my longer pieces, a balance in my writing ?. Thank you.
Wendy

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Very pretty image with the pink background.
Nice entry for the upcoming 2-4-2 contest.
I wish you the very best of luck Wendy,
Lisasview, new to this site

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you very much Lisa, for your kind words and good wishes.
Wendy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this short, sweet, and to the point contest entry with us. Yes, bees are busy and very important to our environment. I am highly allergic to them but understand their importance. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you for reviewing and for the good wishes. Always appreciated.
Wendy

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the pink background and the picture. Beautiful flower with the help
Of a bee keeps cycles of life.

It is a lovely poem full of love, life energy and forever life cycles.

This is a good contest entry. Good luck.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023

Thank you for a great review. I was hoping people would be prompted to think of the role and significance of bees.
Wendy