2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from shelley kaye
love the satori! i can just see a little bug sailing away...
great 575!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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love the satori! i can just see a little bug sailing away...
great 575!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your 5/7/5 poem- nice picture presentation of the leaf- good syllable count - poem flows well- ((bug sails out to sea?) A thought- good luck in the contest Bless
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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I like your 5/7/5 poem- nice picture presentation of the leaf- good syllable count - poem flows well- ((bug sails out to sea?) A thought- good luck in the contest Bless
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for the suggestion, your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....with my bad luck, something would fall alright, and it ain't a leaf, it'd be a heavy limb that would seek me out like an air-to-ground missile!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....with my bad luck, something would fall alright, and it ain't a leaf, it'd be a heavy limb that would seek me out like an air-to-ground missile!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love poems about trees. Love trees. All kinds and all shapes. A tree is like the pinup girl of nature. You can tell what season it is by how it is adorned. You told a short sweet story in this. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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I love poems about trees. Love trees. All kinds and all shapes. A tree is like the pinup girl of nature. You can tell what season it is by how it is adorned. You told a short sweet story in this. Gretchen
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like how the bug will go on a long sea voyage. I liked how you covered everything from the tree and wind covering the reasons and start of the voyage.
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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I like how the bug will go on a long sea voyage. I liked how you covered everything from the tree and wind covering the reasons and start of the voyage.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
Love,
marival