Saving Mr. Calvin
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These two kids are young and Kilian was a bit young to be thinking about brushing against a female. Never heard of the word klootzak before so I did appreciate the translation. Well you introduced the red haired girl here like you promised, we will see how things shape up, much enjoyed Jim, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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These two kids are young and Kilian was a bit young to be thinking about brushing against a female. Never heard of the word klootzak before so I did appreciate the translation. Well you introduced the red haired girl here like you promised, we will see how things shape up, much enjoyed Jim, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Oh, my. You must not be too familiar with 14-year old boys, Dolly!
Not sure if that term was actually used in 13th century Holland, but I'm sure some variation of it was in existence. That's today's Dutch term.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, so Kevin when back in time or into another universe. You have me totally buffaloed with this chapter, but saying that, I still greatly enjoyed reading.
Standing next to her in the near-dark with our bodies pressed together (standing beside her)
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Okay, so Kevin when back in time or into another universe. You have me totally buffaloed with this chapter, but saying that, I still greatly enjoyed reading.
Standing next to her in the near-dark with our bodies pressed together (standing beside her)
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Same universe--different country and time. I was hoping to surprise folks with this one.
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You accomplished that. LOL
Comment from Kaiku
Very fun reading this chapter. Such a way with your story telling. Light, airy and refreshing. I will stay closer to your writings and look forward to the ongoing entertainment. Cheers. My sister calls me Calvin.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Very fun reading this chapter. Such a way with your story telling. Light, airy and refreshing. I will stay closer to your writings and look forward to the ongoing entertainment. Cheers. My sister calls me Calvin.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thanks for the great review and the stars, Calvin! This story is a little different from the others.
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of course. You are able to provide an interesting twist to many of life's fairways.