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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from lyenochka
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I love how you make the earth and river and moon all come together in this poem. The moon rocks are gently caressed by the river showing a romantic scene.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it. You understand it well.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️