The Green Snake
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Comment from patcelaw
I really enjoyed this little story. It was cute. I have in my book the first one book that I wrote a story and it's called outsmarted. And it is a story about a situation with a snake when I was in high school and the science class went to the park for a picnic. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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I really enjoyed this little story. It was cute. I have in my book the first one book that I wrote a story and it's called outsmarted. And it is a story about a situation with a snake when I was in high school and the science class went to the park for a picnic. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Patricia for the great review and your very nice comments. I would love to read your story about the snake! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I would be just as scared as you hear, but we rarely see a snake in England, although some people keep them as pets. I enjoyed your story Teri, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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I would be just as scared as you hear, but we rarely see a snake in England, although some people keep them as pets. I enjoyed your story Teri, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Dolly for the great review and very nice comments. I wish we didn't have any here! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Teri, with your contest entry.
You expressed your thoughts and feelings of that
day meeting the green snake. I agree with you about
snakes. They need to stay far away from me in the fields
so I don't see them. Your story was interesting and well
told.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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You did a great job, Teri, with your contest entry.
You expressed your thoughts and feelings of that
day meeting the green snake. I agree with you about
snakes. They need to stay far away from me in the fields
so I don't see them. Your story was interesting and well
told.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Jan for this great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This just fulfils the precept that one person's joy is another's sorrow. I very much enjoyed your discovery that the garden hose was alive, and can sympathise with the terror you must have felt. kay
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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This just fulfils the precept that one person's joy is another's sorrow. I very much enjoyed your discovery that the garden hose was alive, and can sympathise with the terror you must have felt. kay
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Kay for this great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from JSD
Yuck! Snakes! A good dramatic tale with an amusing twist. This was enjoyable and engaging, written in a light, fun style. Well done.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Yuck! Snakes! A good dramatic tale with an amusing twist. This was enjoyable and engaging, written in a light, fun style. Well done.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you John for your great review and your very nice comments. I have had a few memories that have come to my mind these days! Blessings, Teri
Comment from damommy
That would surely be a shock. I don't blame you. Funny when you said the hose was looking back at you. I climbed a lot of trees when I was a little girl, too.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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That would surely be a shock. I don't blame you. Funny when you said the hose was looking back at you. I climbed a lot of trees when I was a little girl, too.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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lol I hope you didn't see two eyes look at you also! lol It was not fun to me. I am surprised my heart dent stop! love and blessings, Teri
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I didn't have any snakes in the trees.
Comment from royowen
Yes, I do understand how you feel Teri, in Australia, we have some of the world's most venomous ones, in fact six out of the top ten, but they are mostly shy, and run away rather than confront. This is beautifully written dear girl, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Yes, I do understand how you feel Teri, in Australia, we have some of the world's most venomous ones, in fact six out of the top ten, but they are mostly shy, and run away rather than confront. This is beautifully written dear girl, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Roy for this great review and your very nice comments. That is scary to know those type are around where you live. I pray every day that I do not see a snake, flea or tick! lol. Blessings, Teri
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Very very few die of a snake bite, many more from accidents,
Comment from jessizero
This was definitely an "eep" worthy story! I would have freaked out had I had such an encounter with a snake. You told the story well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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This was definitely an "eep" worthy story! I would have freaked out had I had such an encounter with a snake. You told the story well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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lol Thank you Jessi. It was a creepy time for me. My friend was kind of weird in that she could grab one and not be afraid. I guess I was a 10 year old scaredy cat! lol. love and blessings, teri