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Super Pig and Evelyn Elf Owl

Super Pig saves a tiny lost owl

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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We had a nest of very small owls along the road here in Ely one year. I was told they were Burrowing Owls. They sure were cute. Well done Roxie.

typo > protection from the heavy rain drop[s]
Nancy:)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    There are a number of small owls, but I have never heard of such tiny ones. The Lord sure came up with a variety of species to keep us learning. Thanks so much Nancy.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Thank a lot for telling us about Elf Owl and wrote a nice story for it. Yes. Super Pig will help her to find her family. What a cute and amazing super hero.

Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank so much Jasmine Girl. It was very fun to write.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Aah, the adventures of Super Pig, I remember! This is a charming little tale that engaged me straightaway with the image and your very clear text. The baby owl's name is delightful and you certainly know how to bring these creature characters to life. There will be quite a task on hand for Super Pig (we know that she has kindness and support at his core - though not, maybe, super powers of the other kind:) I look forward to reading more of your excellently written prose. Your notes are also very helpful. Thanks for sharing, Roxanne. Debbie

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much Debbie. It's been a long time since I've written a SP story. Now I have to figure out how to end it, well finding Evie's mom of course, but it must be done with SP flair. =]
Comment from papa55mike
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I love this story! We hear the owl and nighthawks in the very early mornings about once a week. They live in the woods across the street. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your project!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much. I live in FL and we have many noisy birds, but no Elf Owls. =] Thanks so much Mike.
Comment from JSD
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A sweet story. Lovely characters with authentic voices. Just at the end, do you mean 'costume'? I really enjoyed the little journey you took us on into this animal world. Thank you.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    I fixed my boo boo, thank you for that and the very nice review.
reply by JSD on 17-Jun-2023
    Cool! X