Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm so happy you ended with that affirmation of God calling you His masterpiece! Your poem is such a comfort to us all because we all feel down sometimes. But we can remember how precious we are to the Lord! Loved your poem!!

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023

Thank you, big sister, I'm happy you like it.

Love,

Marival ❤️

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

Beautifully written and portrayed. I like the profound message pieces and I like you and Lyenochka so this is a six star for me.

Nice work here. I couldn't pick a favorite line because they all emote beauty.

Thank you!
D

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023

Douglas,
Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This poem is somewhat different than your usual style. However, it is every bit as well-written and presented. I love the color and artwork you add to each of your poems. This one is a lovely addition to your collection.

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023

I like to write a variety of poems to keep it interesting. :)

Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs