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Comment from lyenochka
What a perceptive view of the picture to compose this compassionate poem. You saw a soul with a "broken wing." And some sensitive souls are attracted to the wounded because they want to help heal. But often that leads to more hurt to both because love should be about both parties giving to one another not just one giving to heal.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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What a perceptive view of the picture to compose this compassionate poem. You saw a soul with a "broken wing." And some sensitive souls are attracted to the wounded because they want to help heal. But often that leads to more hurt to both because love should be about both parties giving to one another not just one giving to heal.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Yup, that sounds familiar. There had been many broken wings to fix.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Love you, big sister.
Marival
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
your tanka poem is profound and very heartening. That someone can care about another person so deeply renews the reader's faith in people.
God and people heal hurts.
Excellent poem, Gypsy. I like the use of the bird too.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Gypsy,
your tanka poem is profound and very heartening. That someone can care about another person so deeply renews the reader's faith in people.
God and people heal hurts.
Excellent poem, Gypsy. I like the use of the bird too.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, Cindy. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is lovely. Thanks for the full explanation of Tanka, which is quite helpful. I particularly enjoyed the metaphor of the broken wing to accompany the sad eyes. Nicely done! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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This is lovely. Thanks for the full explanation of Tanka, which is quite helpful. I particularly enjoyed the metaphor of the broken wing to accompany the sad eyes. Nicely done! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, Carol, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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Hugs back! And congrats on your book.
Comment from shelley kaye
love blue eyes lol
sad tanka yet with an air of hope
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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love blue eyes lol
sad tanka yet with an air of hope
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I have blue eyes :)
Thank you very much, Shelley. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
There are a few people around the place who have been wounded by circumstance. This is wonderful example of your ability to be a master of theses forms Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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There are a few people around the place who have been wounded by circumstance. This is wonderful example of your ability to be a master of theses forms Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Beautifully written, beautifully presented. I enjoyed reading it very much. You did such a good job with all of your writing. I appreciate all that you're write. Have a good day Patricia.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Beautifully written, beautifully presented. I enjoyed reading it very much. You did such a good job with all of your writing. I appreciate all that you're write. Have a good day Patricia.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, Patricia. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs