A Western girl
What lies ahead?15 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This fits the 3-6-9 brief perfectly and the rhythm is almost like the movement of a horse. You have a fun, lighthearted theme here, enhanced by the visual and, together, a very worthy contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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This fits the 3-6-9 brief perfectly and the rhythm is almost like the movement of a horse. You have a fun, lighthearted theme here, enhanced by the visual and, together, a very worthy contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thanks Debbie.
Comment from karenina
Nice job giving us a trio of 3-6-9's and capturing the spirit of a young woman setting out to discover herself and the world! The artwork seems perfect for your theme. This brings to mind the thoughts of every mother who has ever seen their sixteen-year-old daughter go off on her own!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Nice job giving us a trio of 3-6-9's and capturing the spirit of a young woman setting out to discover herself and the world! The artwork seems perfect for your theme. This brings to mind the thoughts of every mother who has ever seen their sixteen-year-old daughter go off on her own!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Karenina.
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Welcome!
Comment from shelley kaye
Riding her horse, Joey on the plain <-- i think you need a comma after 'joey'. may want to check on that.
other than that, this was an excellent 369 poem about claire
good syllable count; smooth flow and nice rhyme added; and a cool pic to accompany
nice work - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Riding her horse, Joey on the plain <-- i think you need a comma after 'joey'. may want to check on that.
other than that, this was an excellent 369 poem about claire
good syllable count; smooth flow and nice rhyme added; and a cool pic to accompany
nice work - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review. Jen.
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poem of the cowgirl. I love this form of poetry. You've done a wonderful job. A ribbon winner, I predict.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jen, and blessings to you and yours.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem of the cowgirl. I love this form of poetry. You've done a wonderful job. A ribbon winner, I predict.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jen, and blessings to you and yours.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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I am thrilled that you like it Sally. Thanks so much for your kind words. Have a happy Sunday. Jen♥️
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You too, Jen! Sal XOs
Comment from PoemsOfDD
A nice light 3-6-9 stack entry for the contest.
I like that it is about living life with freedom and out to in the fresh air with the world waiting.
Just a comment on the very first line - it is only 2 syllables.
- Here is Claire - will bring it up to the required three syllables. Best of luck in the competition.
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A nice light 3-6-9 stack entry for the contest.
I like that it is about living life with freedom and out to in the fresh air with the world waiting.
Just a comment on the very first line - it is only 2 syllables.
- Here is Claire - will bring it up to the required three syllables. Best of luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thanks Diana. Silly me, I?ve corrected it. Take care. Jen.