One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. I like this astronomical verse. You always do a superb job within these restrictions. I really enjoyed the artwork you chose and the phrase... lost in the celestial you... a great read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Hello Gypsy. I like this astronomical verse. You always do a superb job within these restrictions. I really enjoyed the artwork you chose and the phrase... lost in the celestial you... a great read.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this poem is so sweet and romantic too. I especially liked:
I dream of your eyes
and breathtaking smile
lost in the celestial you
(Below the halo of the moon, magic happens.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, this poem is so sweet and romantic too. I especially liked:
I dream of your eyes
and breathtaking smile
lost in the celestial you
(Below the halo of the moon, magic happens.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Virtual Six Stars! I was first taken with the image and presentation of the your words. The presentation supports the poem very well. I wanted to swing on a crescent moon too. The way you describe the eyes and smile and then you write lost in the celestial you very pretty, Laredo can definitely think of their loved one when they read that.Super gorgeous poem. Btw I read about your haiku group and it looks like it might be ending soon? Or should I still join? Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Virtual Six Stars! I was first taken with the image and presentation of the your words. The presentation supports the poem very well. I wanted to swing on a crescent moon too. The way you describe the eyes and smile and then you write lost in the celestial you very pretty, Laredo can definitely think of their loved one when they read that.Super gorgeous poem. Btw I read about your haiku group and it looks like it might be ending soon? Or should I still join? Thank you.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is quite an exquisite tanka. I like how you describe this person by using the moon and the stars.
Good luck, Gypsy. Have a nice Friday.
(The sun made my mood bright today)
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Gypsy,
This is quite an exquisite tanka. I like how you describe this person by using the moon and the stars.
Good luck, Gypsy. Have a nice Friday.
(The sun made my mood bright today)
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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The sun does that to me too. :)
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine, ambient presentation as you suggest that the person you desire dazzles you with their smile and eyes, much enjoyed, a fine tanka, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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A fine, ambient presentation as you suggest that the person you desire dazzles you with their smile and eyes, much enjoyed, a fine tanka, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
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Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Cuddled in a Crescent Moon, has the proper formatting and brings the three things together that make a romance: two lovers and an agreeable moon.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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This tanka, Cuddled in a Crescent Moon, has the proper formatting and brings the three things together that make a romance: two lovers and an agreeable moon.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
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Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 25-May-2023
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Comment from royowen
I like that for some reason, "lost in celestial you" oh yes indeed, it's been awhile since I've felt that passion that I felt when I was young and very fit, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I like that for some reason, "lost in celestial you" oh yes indeed, it's been awhile since I've felt that passion that I felt when I was young and very fit, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-May-2023
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Most welcome
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Well done