Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This eighty-word story, Read My Mind, has the proper word count and turns the tables on the road-rage rapscallion as the law catches him being his sweet self.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Lol. Thank you for a super review.
Wendy

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting. I didn't recognize some of those charges upon first glance. They seem odd. But, thanks for the notes. Now I understand why.

I think many will enjoy this flash fiction. It has all the needed elements and the characters are what people mostly accept. Good work.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you for reviewing. In Australia it is an offence to have any body part outside a moving vehicle, and to use public obscenities. My husband saw this happen but with a male policeman. Thanks again.
Wendy

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Good one, Wendy. And a lesson for those tailgaters who read it! You have a knack for cutting to the quick of a story. The last line gave me a chuckle. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you Shari, and also for the good wishes. So glad you enjoyed it. A little vengeance is sweet! Lol.
Wendy

Comment from royowen

Excellent

They say revenge is sweet, but in this case satisfaction in being the instrument of justice heh heh, don't you just love it? There's too much road rage, this is beautifully written, my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Yep. Revenge is sweet. Thanks so much for your positive review.
Wendy

reply by royowen on 22-May-2023

Most welcome

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Now this was a perfect piece of fiction filled with Karma. You drew in with his impatience, his dangerous driving only to unleash her power at just the right moment. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you Gretchen. Also for the good wishes. Yes, a little vengeance can be very sweet.
Wendy

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Hahahaha. He learned his lesson, I hope. I don't think we have any laws about body parts outside. I see a lot of people with their arms out. I always told the boys that they could get their arms cut off that way.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you for a super review. Always valued. (Apparently it's not illegal in the US but over here, it's a big no-no. No part of the body is to be outside a moving vehicle.)
Wendy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a wonderful flash fiction and I enjoyed it very much. What a perfect squelcher evil driver. Have a wonderful day. I hope that the weather in Australia is cooler now than it was in the summer. Patricia.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you so much for a very positive review. Yes, much cooler now. The days are nice but early mornings and late evenings are close to freezing point.
Wendy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I have never heard of a law about driving with hands outside a car window being illegal. I googled it. It's not illegal in the US. I enjoyed reading your entry and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thanks Barbara. Over here, there must be no parts of the body outside when a vehicle is moving. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Wendy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is one of those fictional tales one really wishes was in the non-fiction category. Wouldn't you love to do just that to a rod hog? I know I would.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Lol. My husband saw this happen a few years ago, but without the voiced obscenity, and with a male policeman. Thanks so much for reviewing. It?s good to see you back.
Wendy

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Okay, I do ... read your mind, every time you release anything new.
This was quite, and creative fer sur. (Remember I live in the deep South).
Good luck with your submission to this contest.

Tom H

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thanks Tom. I appreciate your review.
Wendy