Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These elements in life all come together for the show and we stand back and watch in awe, I enjoyed your fine words for the contest, an ambient presentation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

rain drops fall gently
requesting beauty's presence ~
rose petals attend

This is very good. I has all the elements needed for a Haiku. You have a good presentation that the members will like.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Very nicely done. I raise roses and enjoy the days when they can receive rain from the heavens. So much cleaner with nutrients they need. Good entry. Hope you do well.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you verymuch

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is avery pretty high school and presentation. he was just the right syllables and imagery for this image! and if the personification at the end is very successful.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you very much