Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 157 "To Find You"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your sailboat is not empty if you are in it. I predict you will find what you are searching for and probably more. Sailboats are wonderful vessels. If you would live by Lake City or Superior, they are sailing everywhere.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Your sailboat is not empty if you are in it. I predict you will find what you are searching for and probably more. Sailboats are wonderful vessels. If you would live by Lake City or Superior, they are sailing everywhere.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you, Rosemary, I hope you are well. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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Comment from kahpot
Excellent, when we are alone or just feel lonely we must remember that God is always there to guide us, all we have to do is ask, very well written and presented Tanka****kahpot
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Excellent, when we are alone or just feel lonely we must remember that God is always there to guide us, all we have to do is ask, very well written and presented Tanka****kahpot
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Kym.
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Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A very lovely poem. May your sails always billow and your boat remain free from the doldrums. And may your voyages always succeed. You are a very good poet.
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A very lovely poem. May your sails always billow and your boat remain free from the doldrums. And may your voyages always succeed. You are a very good poet.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend, I love your quote, is it yours?
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It is. I'm glad it made you happy.
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what is your name, I want to use the quote if I may and give you credit
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You may refer to me as ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova, or Desdinova for short. I rarely use my real name as it's not my favourite.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Looking for the wind perhaps here and being held in the doldrums for a while, when the wind finally breaks, you need to hold on tight, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Looking for the wind perhaps here and being held in the doldrums for a while, when the wind finally breaks, you need to hold on tight, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Kym.
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Comment from royowen
I love the innuendo and the metaphoric symbolism in this great short form poem Gypsy, and excellent post my friend, the boat afloat on the ocean is always a good basis for a poem, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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I love the innuendo and the metaphoric symbolism in this great short form poem Gypsy, and excellent post my friend, the boat afloat on the ocean is always a good basis for a poem, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you, Roy, it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review.
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
This well written tanka with the pivot to the "you" in the middle could be either a love poem or a prayer addressed to God as He is our true North and can always guide us and give us strength.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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This well written tanka with the pivot to the "you" in the middle could be either a love poem or a prayer addressed to God as He is our true North and can always guide us and give us strength.
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Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you, Big Sister, it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review.
Love you,
marival
Comment from Ricky1024
It's nice to be able to take the ability and use of words and change everything completely around like you did here.
Very Nautically written, rich and theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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It's nice to be able to take the ability and use of words and change everything completely around like you did here.
Very Nautically written, rich and theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you, ricky, it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review.
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