Fish Flush
Now get me out of here!16 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I would have flushed a talking fish twice. That fish was possessed.
Good entry. I like how you incorporated the required words. Your poem told a funny and complete story.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Hmm, I would have flushed a talking fish twice. That fish was possessed.
Good entry. I like how you incorporated the required words. Your poem told a funny and complete story.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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LOL on the 2nd flush! And thanks so much for the great review... so glad you enjoyed! Have a wonderful Memorial Day weekend!
Comment from Aiona
LOL! This is hilarious! It also fits the contest rules concerning the ending words, and you did it seemingly so effortlessly! The poem flows like you just intended to use those words.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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LOL! This is hilarious! It also fits the contest rules concerning the ending words, and you did it seemingly so effortlessly! The poem flows like you just intended to use those words.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you so very much, Aiona, for the wonderful review! So happy it made you laugh! I don't even know how I thought of the fish story, except by thinking of funny things you might flush down the drain! Thank you again for the great review and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear Poet, a really great
example of humor poetry.
The borrowed words used
were perfect. My very best
wishes and regards for the
competition. This is a strong
contender. ~
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Dear Poet, a really great
example of humor poetry.
The borrowed words used
were perfect. My very best
wishes and regards for the
competition. This is a strong
contender. ~
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Hi, Regina! Thank you so much for the great review! It was a fun one to try and come up with a poem that fit with the ending rhymes required. So happy you enjoyed! Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Another clever and very successful use of the specified rhyming words. Super job here and a fun read. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Another clever and very successful use of the specified rhyming words. Super job here and a fun read. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thanks so much for a wonderful review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a wonderful write, loved the humour and we had a tropical fish tank when I was a kid and sometimes he fish would look dead and float when they were very much alive! Ha ha ha, you made me smile with this one, very entertaining, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Ha ha ha, this is a wonderful write, loved the humour and we had a tropical fish tank when I was a kid and sometimes he fish would look dead and float when they were very much alive! Ha ha ha, you made me smile with this one, very entertaining, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thanks, Dolly, for your wonderful review! Those fish can really fool you sometimes! So glad this brought laughs and smiles - Have a delightfully fun evening!
Comment from jessizero
Your poem made me laugh. Then I saw the P.S. and laughed again. I think we have all flushed a fish before. I hope none of them were faking! You did a great job with this borrowed rhyme poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Your poem made me laugh. Then I saw the P.S. and laughed again. I think we have all flushed a fish before. I hope none of them were faking! You did a great job with this borrowed rhyme poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thanks so much for the fun review! So glad you enjoyed and got two good laughs! Thanks again and have a wonderful evening!
