Positive Aging
My body: An irregular tale of then and now.12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sentiments here as this write is very entertaining as we fine solace in our cats and books and forget about betrayal and heartache, a fun read, well rhymed and humorous too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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I love the sentiments here as this write is very entertaining as we fine solace in our cats and books and forget about betrayal and heartache, a fun read, well rhymed and humorous too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem. If I can't laugh at myself and accept who I am as I age then it is a sorry world.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's a very good poem. I thought you're rhyming scheme too and you're layout looks great. And I read it out loud if it's nicely off the tongue. I to enjoy your subject matter, your word choices and you're so sentence structure very well done.
I finally know which is dramatically and it's aesthetically pleasing finding this great transmission. I wouldn't change it. I wish it's better luck and have a great evening!
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reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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That's a very good poem. I thought you're rhyming scheme too and you're layout looks great. And I read it out loud if it's nicely off the tongue. I to enjoy your subject matter, your word choices and you're so sentence structure very well done.
I finally know which is dramatically and it's aesthetically pleasing finding this great transmission. I wouldn't change it. I wish it's better luck and have a great evening!
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Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your lovely comments and good wishes.
