Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Bluebells in particular seem to fade quickly, they delight us for a short time and then they are gone as summer takes over from spring, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the alliteration and consonance in the poem. It makes me sad to think of the "fallen chick" if it died. But your notes says it was just fledging and learning to fly after falling. In either case, it's hard for the mother bird to watch.

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 Comment Written 14-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Yes, I was trying to be dramatic. LoL. Usually the mother will keep an eye on fallen chicks but other times will not. I heard that if a baby birds fall out of the nest the mother will leave it and focus on the ones in the nest. Either way is sad. Poor baby bird.

Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you had a great day and found time to rest.

Love you,
Marival

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

It's such a good idea to connect all the things in nature together, the dark cloud that is blue, blue flowers and the falling chicks. Why not the falling blue Jay?

Well done.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

It has to be a baby bird, the tragedy is it fell out of the nest and left to die, you can't use a full grown bird.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review ,and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugsIt has to be a baby bird, the tragedy is it fell out of the nest and left to die, you can't use a full grown bird.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review ,and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs