One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
This poem would be perfect for the betrayal poem contest. The pain and hurt really comes through. The ending is powerful because of the US that could have been forever dissipating into nothingness.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This poem would be perfect for the betrayal poem contest. The pain and hurt really comes through. The ending is powerful because of the US that could have been forever dissipating into nothingness.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for understanding and reviewing so well, as you always do. Love you, big sister.
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
this is such a sad poem of heartbreak and loss
yet at the same time there is a sparkle of hope deep within
great imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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this is such a sad poem of heartbreak and loss
yet at the same time there is a sparkle of hope deep within
great imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Stunning verse with equally stunning image. I really enjoyed reading this and absorbing the heartfelt sentiments. It's a great verse form and though it is free you've structured it so well that it feels metered and rhyming. I'm very impressed, Gypsy and would like to try it myself at some point....maybe (with more confidence). Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Stunning verse with equally stunning image. I really enjoyed reading this and absorbing the heartfelt sentiments. It's a great verse form and though it is free you've structured it so well that it feels metered and rhyming. I'm very impressed, Gypsy and would like to try it myself at some point....maybe (with more confidence). Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Yes, give it a try, you will be great. Just connect to your heart and let go.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I believe bonds work better if one's dependence isn't quite in the "smothering" department, but this is beautifully written, though really in the young relational department, I had one of these and it didn't work, heh heh, beautiful written Gypsy, superbly so, blessings Roy
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I believe bonds work better if one's dependence isn't quite in the "smothering" department, but this is beautifully written, though really in the young relational department, I had one of these and it didn't work, heh heh, beautiful written Gypsy, superbly so, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome