My Mother's Day Gift
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about mothers day. A good entry for the Mother's Day writing prompt contest.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Excellent poem about mothers day. A good entry for the Mother's Day writing prompt contest.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from karenina
Hey, anyone writing a tribute to their mom for this contest is already a winner in my book. Well written well phrased, well rhymed, and with the best message of all..." love" is the greatest gift!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Hey, anyone writing a tribute to their mom for this contest is already a winner in my book. Well written well phrased, well rhymed, and with the best message of all..." love" is the greatest gift!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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You're too sweet. And you're right...love is the greatest gift. Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Mother's Day writing prompt with us. Yes, it's horrible with a mother dies. I am blessed to still have mine, she's 91. We live 16 hours apart, but I still call her daily. She's vital to my life.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing this Mother's Day writing prompt with us. Yes, it's horrible with a mother dies. I am blessed to still have mine, she's 91. We live 16 hours apart, but I still call her daily. She's vital to my life.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Yes you are...you're very blessed. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an excellent tribute to your mother. I could say the same for mine. I would love to see her for Mother's Day. Our love and honor is all we have to give for our dear ones who left us their wisdom. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is an excellent tribute to your mother. I could say the same for mine. I would love to see her for Mother's Day. Our love and honor is all we have to give for our dear ones who left us their wisdom. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your sweet review and good luck wish.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Your mother gave you everything but she left too soon. Sounds like a friend I have who recently lost her mother. She has to grieve her loss and reciprocate her love to others she knows so that her love will grow and grow until she passes away as well. This is a wonderful Mother's Day card and wishes for every mother who is still around.
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Your mother gave you everything but she left too soon. Sounds like a friend I have who recently lost her mother. She has to grieve her loss and reciprocate her love to others she knows so that her love will grow and grow until she passes away as well. This is a wonderful Mother's Day card and wishes for every mother who is still around.
Jesse
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you, Jesse...so well said. Only those who have lost a mother can fully appreciate your words.
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Yes, we have both lost our mothers too soon.
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six for this beautiful Mother's Day tribute, mystery poet. Better than a Hallmark card any day. Precious!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Virtual six for this beautiful Mother's Day tribute, mystery poet. Better than a Hallmark card any day. Precious!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your review (virtual six) and best wishes, Sending you my best and God's blessings.
Mystery poet
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice poem well done. I'm sure your mother would be delighted with it. I mean it's a lovely picture in background to go with it makes for a refreshing and sweet ode to your mother very nice.
She is still there just can't quite see her every time you. Think of her or call her name she turns to smell at you. This is a lovely and poignant palm and I wish you all the best in the contacts have a great day!
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reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Very nice poem well done. I'm sure your mother would be delighted with it. I mean it's a lovely picture in background to go with it makes for a refreshing and sweet ode to your mother very nice.
She is still there just can't quite see her every time you. Think of her or call her name she turns to smell at you. This is a lovely and poignant palm and I wish you all the best in the contacts have a great day!
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Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you for your review and sweet comments.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a nice poem that would be lovely in a greeting card. Favorite line: She taught me to give,
I liked the last two lines. I rather think you could take out the comma after the word 'love' in the next to last line. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This is a nice poem that would be lovely in a greeting card. Favorite line: She taught me to give,
I liked the last two lines. I rather think you could take out the comma after the word 'love' in the next to last line. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you for your review and constructive comment, I did just that,