Peanut Butter and Jelly
A Dialogue story15 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I've got to say writing dialogue has always intimidated me. If I was ever going to try it I'd like it to be this way...just straight dialogue with no tags, etc. You've taken a fairly conventional conversation I can imagine many a child having on school lunch break and made it a fun read. Hmm. I've never had blackberry jelly either. (Might have to get me some of that!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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I've got to say writing dialogue has always intimidated me. If I was ever going to try it I'd like it to be this way...just straight dialogue with no tags, etc. You've taken a fairly conventional conversation I can imagine many a child having on school lunch break and made it a fun read. Hmm. I've never had blackberry jelly either. (Might have to get me some of that!)
Karenina
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Smiles and giggles,thank-you
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I'll take giggles. Giggles are always great!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really funny, and good. A dialogue only story, all about peanut butter and jelly. I have never eaten one, it's not a sandwich filling you see here in England. You did a job with this, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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That was really funny, and good. A dialogue only story, all about peanut butter and jelly. I have never eaten one, it's not a sandwich filling you see here in England. You did a job with this, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have always wondered what jelly is? Is it jam? I have never tasted one of these sandwiches before so I found your dialogue post interesting, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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I have always wondered what jelly is? Is it jam? I have never tasted one of these sandwiches before so I found your dialogue post interesting, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Jelly is less dense, Jam is much more preferred.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Reading this dialogue was like listening in while two friendly sixth graders had a conversation about what they might do on the weekend. Your chosen artwork paired perfectly with the dialogue and intensified your message. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Reading this dialogue was like listening in while two friendly sixth graders had a conversation about what they might do on the weekend. Your chosen artwork paired perfectly with the dialogue and intensified your message. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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LJ, thanks!
Comment from royowen
Isn't that Judy wonderful? Two people in complete agreement, and about all things pertaining to peanut butter and jelly, it's hard enough for people to agree on thing, this is a miracle, a wonderful job my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Isn't that Judy wonderful? Two people in complete agreement, and about all things pertaining to peanut butter and jelly, it's hard enough for people to agree on thing, this is a miracle, a wonderful job my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you.
