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Word salad

A 5/5/5 entry

18 total reviews 
Comment from Janel Mock
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I love how you picked words that each have 5 syllables! Very clever and was actually fun to read even though I did have to look up the last two words. Thank you for helping broadening my vocabulary tonight! ~Janel

 Comment Written 05-May-2023


reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Thank you Janel, my author notes at the bottom also provided the definition, However I am glad I have helped in a small way to Increase your vocabulary.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An unusual write and I had to look up two of these words to understand your poem here, I wish you luck with the contest, fine syllable count, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 05-May-2023
    Dolly, so that my author notes were not more clearly visible I will look at making them more prominent. Thanks for your review, as always.
Comment from LisaMay
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I choked a bit on your 'word salad' but I applaud your offering of a different subject for readers.
I think it would be troublesome to have 'an obsession with recalling a specific word' if the words were all tricky ones like these in the poem!

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    LisaMay, thank you and a big smile back to you.
Comment from JT traveller
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Fantastic command of the English language. Hats off to you. Creative, well presented and thought provoking. Love that you introduced us to a new word, loganamnosis. Great stuff. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Jacqueline, thank you!
Comment from Ben Colder
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Interesting concept. I must admit you had me digging in the dictionary then I read your foot notes. It helped. The syllable count was there. I see nothing wrong. Best to you.

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thank you, Ben
Comment from Kaiku
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yes, whatever you said seems to be a perfect indication that there needs to be a fulfillment with utterances that would prevail in a crowded room with no one really paying attention other than that random high pitched laugh. What?

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    yes, I think so? Big smiles, of course.
reply by Kaiku on 04-May-2023
    of course (smile)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Excellent! And I think that would be a tasty treat!

Your poem is very creative and goes well with the challenge, as does the image. Good writing and Best wishes to you!

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from royowen
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If I was worrying about new words to express myself, I would look up in the dictionary to express myself. Just love these words my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Smile back! Thank you, Roy.
reply by royowen on 04-May-2023
    Well done