Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 149 "Flying Through the Night"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, I think that you wore that starry sequin gown for your secret lover--Mr. Moon or, perhaps, the man on the moon.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery within.
Of special note:
the moon comes along
and I wear a starry sequin gown
ready to land by your sleepy head
(I'm sure that someone will be waiting for you in the awesome gown.)
A fun poem that made me smile. Well done; well told. A pleasure to read. Beautiful presentation. Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, I think that you wore that starry sequin gown for your secret lover--Mr. Moon or, perhaps, the man on the moon.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery within.
Of special note:
the moon comes along
and I wear a starry sequin gown
ready to land by your sleepy head
(I'm sure that someone will be waiting for you in the awesome gown.)
A fun poem that made me smile. Well done; well told. A pleasure to read. Beautiful presentation. Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you very much, margaret, for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay, I would give you six stars just for the picture, but you matched her magical beauty with your equally exquisite flowing words.
I could expect no less from a Magical Unicorn as this could not possibly be created by a mere human mind.
Should I have Tom just give you all of my sixes on Sunday and cut out the middle man?
Probably should have sixed the cheating one as it equally elicited raw emotion, having been the one cheated on. I had that moment sitting against the wall in a fog. Didn't review it cause it felt icky due to my history. Still a great pair of works.
You are something special, my friend.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Okay, I would give you six stars just for the picture, but you matched her magical beauty with your equally exquisite flowing words.
I could expect no less from a Magical Unicorn as this could not possibly be created by a mere human mind.
Should I have Tom just give you all of my sixes on Sunday and cut out the middle man?
Probably should have sixed the cheating one as it equally elicited raw emotion, having been the one cheated on. I had that moment sitting against the wall in a fog. Didn't review it cause it felt icky due to my history. Still a great pair of works.
You are something special, my friend.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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I'm overwhelmed by your kind words and I love to be your magical unicorn. LoL
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.
Big big hugs, Douglas
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the imagery of flying through the night soaring over dreams!
a great gogyohka - thank you for sharing with us
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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i like the imagery of flying through the night soaring over dreams!
a great gogyohka - thank you for sharing with us
shelley :)
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from RodG
This Japanese poetic form is new to me, and I like how you have used it to describe a nymph or fairy who visits during the night. Especially noteworthy is your description of her gown.
Rod
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This Japanese poetic form is new to me, and I like how you have used it to describe a nymph or fairy who visits during the night. Especially noteworthy is your description of her gown.
Rod
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy