Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 147 "Sliding Into Your World"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sensual and passionate, yet innocent. I like the way you put this newfound love, helplessly colliding into a joined universe, giving birth to a million stars. It doesn't get any better than this. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Sensual and passionate, yet innocent. I like the way you put this newfound love, helplessly colliding into a joined universe, giving birth to a million stars. It doesn't get any better than this. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a devastating tanka, Gypsy. Your dual pictures said it all, the force, the love and the million stars. Your words picked up where you left behind the force. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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What a devastating tanka, Gypsy. Your dual pictures said it all, the force, the love and the million stars. Your words picked up where you left behind the force. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for the kind review and wonderful feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy Yes a good description of a new love affair and you write it so well with a great image choice for further impact as your work portrays
Nice Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Yes a good description of a new love affair and you write it so well with a great image choice for further impact as your work portrays
Nice Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for the kind review and wonderful feedback.
Gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
ou-la-la!
The desired effect to stir the visual imagination of a reader, and painted so precisely with fine strokes to allow the final 'big bang'... the birth of a million stars.
Suggestive, yet so tasteful in its passion.
Outstanding!
With our thoughts we create...
A new world.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
ou-la-la!
The desired effect to stir the visual imagination of a reader, and painted so precisely with fine strokes to allow the final 'big bang'... the birth of a million stars.
Suggestive, yet so tasteful in its passion.
Outstanding!
With our thoughts we create...
A new world.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you, James. I'm glad to hear from you. Thank you for the lovely review. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from royowen
What a deeply perceptive insight you've uncovered here Gypsy, yes, that's the way encounters should, the precipitation of two forces becoming irresistible, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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What a deeply perceptive insight you've uncovered here Gypsy, yes, that's the way encounters should, the precipitation of two forces becoming irresistible, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
Loved description of the union as "our joined universe
gives birth to a million stars" to describe a passionate love that is a perfect merge of two lives.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Loved description of the union as "our joined universe
gives birth to a million stars" to describe a passionate love that is a perfect merge of two lives.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Yes, thank you for the perfect interpretation and review. Love you ❤️
Marival ❤️
Comment from AshleyV
Your poem is so pretty, I love it. The pictures you chose match it perfectly too. The ending is beautifully written. Colliding as one universe to create a galaxy. Very well done
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Your poem is so pretty, I love it. The pictures you chose match it perfectly too. The ending is beautifully written. Colliding as one universe to create a galaxy. Very well done
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
That was an amazing poem. Both simple and sensuous. So many stars to make wishes from. And so many good things to come from each one. Keep writing poetry. You're very good at it.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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That was an amazing poem. Both simple and sensuous. So many stars to make wishes from. And so many good things to come from each one. Keep writing poetry. You're very good at it.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from shelley kaye
i like that image of love giving birth to a million stars...
your second picture should've been some kind of star pic! lol
a great tanka!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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i like that image of love giving birth to a million stars...
your second picture should've been some kind of star pic! lol
a great tanka!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis