One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
It's sad when love is only one- sided. I like how the poem starts with the commonality of being under the same full moon. Yet, they are so far apart and there are many others who love him, so she's content with the moon.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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It's sad when love is only one- sided. I like how the poem starts with the commonality of being under the same full moon. Yet, they are so far apart and there are many others who love him, so she's content with the moon.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Yes! You get it, why doesn't everyone get it the way you do? I'm happy you like it, big sister.
Love,
MariVal ❤️
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💖 People are busy getting through their reviewing so I guess they miss the meanings you put in. Did the doctor give you any good advice? Is the coughing better?
Comment from royowen
This excellent poem reminded me of a Robert Goulet song I talk to the trees, and then another, I talk to the moon, which sometimes make better lovers than men with pants on. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This excellent poem reminded me of a Robert Goulet song I talk to the trees, and then another, I talk to the moon, which sometimes make better lovers than men with pants on. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Men with pant on .... hehe
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Well done
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy,, well worded and quite wistful in the poem. Love you quote in the notes too how true. Sometimes sitting under a well lit night sky is so lovely and peaceful too
Cheers Chris PS I'm in love with the sun.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy,, well worded and quite wistful in the poem. Love you quote in the notes too how true. Sometimes sitting under a well lit night sky is so lovely and peaceful too
Cheers Chris PS I'm in love with the sun.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, Chris.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The dual pictures were wonderful but the moon was beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were fantastic but true, they didn't lie. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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The dual pictures were wonderful but the moon was beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were fantastic but true, they didn't lie. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Gloria ....
A stunning presentation at this wistful look at unrequited love. But the moon at least shall always be the connection.
Great free verse and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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A stunning presentation at this wistful look at unrequited love. But the moon at least shall always be the connection.
Great free verse and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aw this is so sad... unrequited love standing alone...
this was a beautiful poem with an awesome picture and colour presentation
nice work -
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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aw this is so sad... unrequited love standing alone...
this was a beautiful poem with an awesome picture and colour presentation
nice work -
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I Like your free verse poem- excellent picture presentation of the full moon- nice - poem tells an interesting story that makes me want to rhyme the words and polish it-
"so I'll make do with my new love the sensual evening moon" - good job AP
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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I Like your free verse poem- excellent picture presentation of the full moon- nice - poem tells an interesting story that makes me want to rhyme the words and polish it-
"so I'll make do with my new love the sensual evening moon" - good job AP
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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That's mean, ap. My poem doesn't have to rhyme because it's free verse. What do you mean polish?
Thank you for the review
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Means - your free verse is fine- about my tendency to want to rhyme the words in your story- now isn?t free verse without rules? Or would rhyme make it no longer a free verse? Confusing Hug AP
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If was just what you said... "interesting story that makes me want to rhyme the words and polish it-
Comment from Julie Lau
A lovely poem, wistful and romantic. I very much admire the way you present your poems; the various shades of blue on the black ground; the atmospheric images. Julie L
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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A lovely poem, wistful and romantic. I very much admire the way you present your poems; the various shades of blue on the black ground; the atmospheric images. Julie L
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely night/day.
Gypsy
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ? Maya Angelou
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely worded, and you have presented it in a beautiful fashion. I am very impressed with this particular piece. I do wish you the very best of all of you you're writing. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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This is very nicely worded, and you have presented it in a beautiful fashion. I am very impressed with this particular piece. I do wish you the very best of all of you you're writing. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely night/day.
Gypsy
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ? Maya Angelou
Comment from Ricky1024
Romantically written with great theme and imagery .
To a degree we all idolize the moon.
Yes, and at night when it's really dark?
The glow is mysterious indeed.
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About five nights ago I saw a double reflective moon which I thought was highly unusual.
Best way to describe it was it was a crescent moon within a half a moon.
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Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
To be in love with the moon you first need to be number one a male.
Number two you have to actually be there.
In other words, Jesus Christ caught a ride on Haley's comment and landed on the moon.
Exhausted. He had nowhere to go.
Didn't even know where there was water?
But there was a house!
He knocked on the door in a beautiful woman wrapped in a towel came to the door.
Her name was Luna.
"The Moon Goddess"
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So after dressing she took him to the Sea of tranquility where they walked along the shores.
They held hands and talked for quite a while and stopped at the moon diner.
They shared a moon pie and talked about the future.
But of course Jesus would need to die on the cross a Calvary on a Rosewood Cross.
Yes, and for the Sins of Humanity.
I would like green cheese on a cracker please for my review?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Romantically written with great theme and imagery .
To a degree we all idolize the moon.
Yes, and at night when it's really dark?
The glow is mysterious indeed.
...
About five nights ago I saw a double reflective moon which I thought was highly unusual.
Best way to describe it was it was a crescent moon within a half a moon.
...
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
To be in love with the moon you first need to be number one a male.
Number two you have to actually be there.
In other words, Jesus Christ caught a ride on Haley's comment and landed on the moon.
Exhausted. He had nowhere to go.
Didn't even know where there was water?
But there was a house!
He knocked on the door in a beautiful woman wrapped in a towel came to the door.
Her name was Luna.
"The Moon Goddess"
...
So after dressing she took him to the Sea of tranquility where they walked along the shores.
They held hands and talked for quite a while and stopped at the moon diner.
They shared a moon pie and talked about the future.
But of course Jesus would need to die on the cross a Calvary on a Rosewood Cross.
Yes, and for the Sins of Humanity.
I would like green cheese on a cracker please for my review?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely night/day.
Gypsy
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ? Maya Angelou