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Adopted By Unknown Stranger In Wal-Mart Parking Lo

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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I'm so relieved to see this posted. I was afraid that you were putting it on hold and might not post again. This is a fascinating story that I am really enjoying. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Appreciate the review and your comments.
Comment from patcelaw
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As usual, as I'm reading along with your story. I am always impressed with the way that you handled life. I do hope that you will continue. I'm writing your story and sharing it with us.. Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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"If only life could be that simple and good in these modern times." I agree with you . If only the children of today could know the freedom we enjoyed as youth. It is a crying shame they have to live in fear. Good job, Brett. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Appreciate the comments and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness you fell out of a moving bus and broke your leg Brett? How dreadful for you, it sounds like you were a bit accident prone, although I am sorry you had such injuries, your life story sounds like it is full of adventures, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Twas not me that fell out of the bus, was my Dad when he was a young 'un. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I agree 100% with your final paragraph. I believe we need to go back to the simpler times and get back to God. I fear for our country and society if we don't. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

I wanted to talk to my friend Gale Smothers. (comma after 'friend')

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That brought memories back to my childhood. We didn't have a bus pick us up living out in the country, we had to walk miles. This was the early 1950s. What was the same, the people living around us on their farms, never locked their doors, either. It was just never thought about. As you say, it's sad how things change. I enjoyed reading about you in your younger years. :)) Sandra

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Life was so much simpler, and would go so far as to say better, back then. Appreciate your insights, comments, and the review.