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Thinking of judiverse

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For judiverse for the loss of her husband

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Comment from BethShelby
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This is a beautiful and meanful poem Sandra. I know Judy will appreciate it deeply. Just reading it has caused tears to stream down my own cheeks as I remember the loss of my own husband nearly six years ago. It is true, you never truly lose someone you love.
Beth

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    I'm sorry I made you cry, dear Beth. It is hard to lose our loved ones. I know how hard it was when my young husband died 40 years ago. I was lucky that I had our two young sons with me. Life isn't fair sometimes. Thank you for reading my poem, and giving me your thoughts. We don't lose them. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Sandra, what a beautiful poem...

I'm so sorry for the loss of Judi's husband...
and your so right...God was there for her...
and He will stay by her side...

this is not the end for Dick...
this is just the beginning...they will
see each other again...and continue their
eternal journey in heaven...

my prayers are with Judi and her family,
and their friends...

your poem is beautiful Sandra...I'm sure
your words will help comfort her...very nicely
written...spoken from your heart...love you much...
Linda xxoo God Bless...

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Hi Linda,

    We seem to be writing a lot of these sad poems lately and it never gets easier. You are right, it's not the end for Dick, and they will be together again. His spirit will be with her until then. Thank you so much for your nice words, my dear friend. I'm glad you thought my poem was nice. Love you lots, back. Sandra xxxx
reply by l.raven on 22-Apr-2023
    yes we do my amazing friend...
    to many...your so very welcome
    Sandra...love you more...Linda xxoo
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is an incredibly understanding poem of what grief is and how the loss is always there, but time and God leave you with wonderful memories. This is certainly going to be very special for Judi.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Carol. That's all I want, to bring he some comfort. I've been there and know just how hard it is. Thank you so much for the sixth star, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Jim Wile
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This was an absolutely beautiful poem, Sandra! I give it a virtual 6 because I've run out. I sure wish I had a real one for you.

The love for Judi that you expressed in this was palpable. It was just so beautifully written with perfect iambic heptameter meter that just flowed wonderfully. An outstanding poem! I'm sure Judi will love it and treasure it always. Jim

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your kind words, Jim, that is so nice of you. The sixes are not important, but your words are. I do appreciate them a lot. Thank you, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautiful writing for Judi and I do pray that she will be comforted by the words that you have so carefully chosen for this. I want Judi to know that we are all with her and are praying for her Patricia.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Judi told me in a message yesterday that this book of poems will be a great help to her in the times ahead. I'm glad I was able to write one for her. Thank you, Patricia, I appreciate your kindness. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Soledadpaz
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What a wonderful poem, a lovely tribute for Dick and Judi. Such a sad thing to lose your partner. To not have your daily companion at your side anymore, even though they never really leave you. Their memory and their spirit in time brings you comfort.

Sol

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Sol. Let's hope that all the poems written for her, will bring her some comfort. I'm glad you liked my words, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from lyenochka
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This is so perfect. And of course, you write from experience so your compassion is born of all that you went through. I especially loved "You never truly lose the one you've loved." I'm going to bookcase to read again when I have to write this kind note to other grieving friends.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Helen. I'm glad you liked what I wrote, it's not easy, is it? Judi has read it, and she liked the words. I'm so pleased my poem helped. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Sandra, this is a very lovely poem you have written to Judi. I did read Judi's story the other day and offered condolences. But these amazing talented poets like you and others on FanStory have risen to the occasion with words of deep meaning. Thank you for writing this. Well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Terry. It was a shock to learn of Judi's husband's death. I knew he was will, but thought he was on the mend. We never know what will happen tomorrow. Thanks again. Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
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What a wonderful post dear Sandra, you don't write your wonderful poetry as much these days, but you do it as if you never did, this is such a wonderfully penned tribute, the words are complete with passion, skill and purpose, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you, my friend. It's hard to write these poems, but we have to try for our friends sake. I'm glad you liked my words, Roy. Thank you. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by royowen on 20-Apr-2023
    Effortless
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem to Judi was awesome, Sandra. Your words
were descriptive of Judi and Richard's life together and
of their faith in God. Your words flowed smoothly with
great imagery. It read like a letter to Judi. I believe it will
give her strength as she navigates through her grief. Of
course, she will forever have her memories til they are reunited.
The picture was beautiful--so calming and relaxing.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much, Jan. It's a hard poem to write, isn't it? We are losing many friends now, and our own are losing loved ones. As has Judi. I hope you are right and it does give her strength in the weeks and months ahead. Thanks again, dear friend. Sandra xx