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Comment from lyenochka
That sounds like a poet - keeping love burning but in secret because most poets are rather introverted like Emily Dickinson. I can imagine someone like her doing precisely this.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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That sounds like a poet - keeping love burning but in secret because most poets are rather introverted like Emily Dickinson. I can imagine someone like her doing precisely this.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. You are right. I am an introvert. (*<>*)
Love,
Marival ❤️
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh now i have to google potoo bird - they sound interesting lol!
very cool poem - i can see someone writing a love letter while listening to the bird...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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ooh now i have to google potoo bird - they sound interesting lol!
very cool poem - i can see someone writing a love letter while listening to the bird...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are strange, ugly looking birds making a fearful sound, this is an eerie write about an unrequited love with a chilling mood here, a melancholy presentation, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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These are strange, ugly looking birds making a fearful sound, this is an eerie write about an unrequited love with a chilling mood here, a melancholy presentation, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RodG
This poem tells a love story that is very touching. She stays up late writing poetry for someone in the same neighborhood who probably will never know she cares for him. But there is that lovely connection--the mournful sound of the photo bird he likely hears too. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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This poem tells a love story that is very touching. She stays up late writing poetry for someone in the same neighborhood who probably will never know she cares for him. But there is that lovely connection--the mournful sound of the photo bird he likely hears too. Rod
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I can remember when I was young that I had some marvellous crushes, even as young as eight, (they were very innocent though) but all unrequited. This is a fantastic post deat Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
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I can remember when I was young that I had some marvellous crushes, even as young as eight, (they were very innocent though) but all unrequited. This is a fantastic post deat Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Yes, I had crushes when I was very young too. Nothing ever happened but I remember that feeling. My true first love was at 15 years old. His name was Pedro, I still remember him.
Thank you, Roy. You are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
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My first real love was when I was eighteen, she dumped me, again when is 26, she dumped me again. Hehe
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Oh boy, that's harsh, but look at you now!
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I was ?lucky? Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
I no longer burning the midnight oil. I am lucky if I stay up till 8 o'clock in the evening. I guess that has to do with the fact that I get up around three to 4 o'clock in the morning. Patricia.
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I no longer burning the midnight oil. I am lucky if I stay up till 8 o'clock in the evening. I guess that has to do with the fact that I get up around three to 4 o'clock in the morning. Patricia.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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4 o'clock! I am a night owl and I like to sleep it :)
Thank you, Margaret. It's so good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs