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Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing how the sins of the parents get passed down to the children and it never fails. At least the abuse we suffered never went any further. What a wonderfully written and honest piece. Best of luck with your project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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It's amazing how the sins of the parents get passed down to the children and it never fails. At least the abuse we suffered never went any further. What a wonderfully written and honest piece. Best of luck with your project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you again mike I very much appreciate it have an awesome day!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I leaned back in my chair tears rolling down - the adult you bringing out the 5 year old who stood and let that bike hit her, what dreadful memories you have lived with Lea. I hope writing about it eventually becomes therapeutic for you.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I leaned back in my chair tears rolling down - the adult you bringing out the 5 year old who stood and let that bike hit her, what dreadful memories you have lived with Lea. I hope writing about it eventually becomes therapeutic for you.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Valda.. I really value your reviews You're quite supportive compassionate and yes it is therapeutic for me This will be closure and away from me to let go. And I do hope what I write will help someone somewhere if it does I am satisfied, thank you again so much!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Lea,
Your writing - the presentation of it - is becoming no less difficult to comprehend, but controlled and measured. I sense this control not only in your use of the tools of writing, but also as you are coming to grips with telling your story. That's a wonderful accomplishment.
Keep writing.
Stay strong!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Good morning, Lea,
Your writing - the presentation of it - is becoming no less difficult to comprehend, but controlled and measured. I sense this control not only in your use of the tools of writing, but also as you are coming to grips with telling your story. That's a wonderful accomplishment.
Keep writing.
Stay strong!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Again diane thank you so much i'm humbled and honored!
Comment from royowen
Yes, it's particularly harrowing, seeing I have two daughters and a granddaughter whom I adore, I have always been protective, all kids need love, nurture and protection, they are special, there innocence needs protecting, they are not owned, they are gifts and blessings, well done, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Yes, it's particularly harrowing, seeing I have two daughters and a granddaughter whom I adore, I have always been protective, all kids need love, nurture and protection, they are special, there innocence needs protecting, they are not owned, they are gifts and blessings, well done, Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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How I wish that my parents had such clarity of mind that you do. Alaska can children have a good home? So bless you for being such a wonderful and loving parent. And grandparent, I'm thank you so much for reading hanging in there and offering your kind and compassionate thoughts. I'm most grateful can I hope that your day is amazing!
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My pleasure, be blessed dear girl.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Wonderfulmetaphor: "I find myself riding that old sway back horse of fear once again." & simile:
"Memories gather at the surface of my mind like little knives stabbing here and there waiting for my pen to lift" I remember I was bleeding & my mother told me it must gave been I hurt myself on my bike. I think my mother was molested as a child on their farm, a haven for perps. She was in great denial as my mother.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Wonderfulmetaphor: "I find myself riding that old sway back horse of fear once again." & simile:
"Memories gather at the surface of my mind like little knives stabbing here and there waiting for my pen to lift" I remember I was bleeding & my mother told me it must gave been I hurt myself on my bike. I think my mother was molested as a child on their farm, a haven for perps. She was in great denial as my mother.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Yes thank you for your comments for sharing that personal information with me. I'm An honored and I am thankful. I'm very glad you found this reading interesting on some comments stood up for you. I appreciate your time as always and for your wonderful in sight I hope your evening is grand!
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an horrific story Lea and it sounds like you have suffered physical abuse since a very young age, you are a brave an courageous woman and telling us your story will help you move on, we are listening.
Just one edit:
could draw (upon) to survive what was coming.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is an horrific story Lea and it sounds like you have suffered physical abuse since a very young age, you are a brave an courageous woman and telling us your story will help you move on, we are listening.
Just one edit:
could draw (upon) to survive what was coming.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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As far back as I can remember. Beginning with team different supply mother and your failure to watch where and I was going and why. How I made it through I don't know but here I am. The comments are greatly appreciated and your incredible insight is apparent and also on par. Thank you again I hope your day is great!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an horrific story Lea and it sounds like you have suffered physical abuse since a very young age, you are a brave an courageous woman and telling us your story will help you move on, we are listening.
Just one edit:
could draw (upon) to survive what was coming.
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is an horrific story Lea and it sounds like you have suffered physical abuse since a very young age, you are a brave an courageous woman and telling us your story will help you move on, we are listening.
Just one edit:
could draw (upon) to survive what was coming.
Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
The title didn't give it away but as I read your introduction to this bio on complications I became aware why you had to peel the onion as you so deftly put it and tell us your story about the abuse you suffered as a child. I understand and can relate to childhood trauma and how it changed you forever.
This is a complicated piece and I might suggest that you put each trauma in a different bio as you continue to peel the onion of your soul.
Jesse
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reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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The title didn't give it away but as I read your introduction to this bio on complications I became aware why you had to peel the onion as you so deftly put it and tell us your story about the abuse you suffered as a child. I understand and can relate to childhood trauma and how it changed you forever.
This is a complicated piece and I might suggest that you put each trauma in a different bio as you continue to peel the onion of your soul.
Jesse
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Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you Jesse you're very kind and your words mean a lot. I have added to that chapter and edited it somewhat as it seemed a little bit prematurely. But that's OK I'm glad to have feedback and I'm glad to hear I will in turn. Look at my 1st home the poem that I wrote and take your suggestions to heart. Thank you so much and have a wonderful day!
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Keep writing and keep your head above water as you decipher the wounds in your heart.