Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "It's fixed"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Looks like the husband is quite a handyman. I reckon, duct tape would not help too much with fixing the chair (lol). Liked the picture of the hammers, they were the great aid, I bet.
Great imagery, humor and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Looks like the husband is quite a handyman. I reckon, duct tape would not help too much with fixing the chair (lol). Liked the picture of the hammers, they were the great aid, I bet.
Great imagery, humor and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much! I'll just say... The chair WAS fixed... lol
Comment from Ricky1024
This wasinteresting and rich in Theme and Imagery. Yes good old duck tape?
Husband's a quack?
Likes to tie things up?
Yuck!
Nice job and good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This wasinteresting and rich in Theme and Imagery. Yes good old duck tape?
Husband's a quack?
Likes to tie things up?
Yuck!
Nice job and good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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lol he relies on duct tape and YouTube haha
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That's very funny, and relatable. However, my husband would fix the chair as best he could, after reading something about fixing chairs. I would cix, and have fixed a chair, with duct tape! Very humorous and nicely written! :))
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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That's very funny, and relatable. However, my husband would fix the chair as best he could, after reading something about fixing chairs. I would cix, and have fixed a chair, with duct tape! Very humorous and nicely written! :))
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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lol thank you, Alexandra! Yes, my husband heavily relies on YouTube-instructed videos haha
Comment from shelley kaye
well, did it work? because duct tape can fix lots of things!
fun little haiku!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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well, did it work? because duct tape can fix lots of things!
fun little haiku!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Shelley! Oh it worked.. for a day or two!
Comment from jessizero
I got a laugh out of this haiku! You did a great job with the syllable count, and the statement was funny. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I got a laugh out of this haiku! You did a great job with the syllable count, and the statement was funny. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much, Jessi!
Comment from royowen
That's the shot, although I tended to be around trade things when I was in my younger life, I was less involved later, now duct tape plays a larger role. Heh heh, beautifully written Jessica, good luck blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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That's the shot, although I tended to be around trade things when I was in my younger life, I was less involved later, now duct tape plays a larger role. Heh heh, beautifully written Jessica, good luck blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy! I just have to tease him on occasion. lol I hope you and your family had a wonderful Easter!
<3
Jessica
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Well done Jessica
Comment from Ginda Simpson
If duct tape can hold my bumper onto my car then it's good enough for carpentry jobs. What a fun haiku you have written, a scene that plays out in more ways then we can imagine.
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If duct tape can hold my bumper onto my car then it's good enough for carpentry jobs. What a fun haiku you have written, a scene that plays out in more ways then we can imagine.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I love that, he was quite pleased to read this review! lol thank you, Ginda!