Seasons of Change
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A very honest, sincere poem which tells a happy story. The use of free verse works well here. In places perhaps the sense of rhythm lapses slightly. It is great to read a poem with a positive outcome!
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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A very honest, sincere poem which tells a happy story. The use of free verse works well here. In places perhaps the sense of rhythm lapses slightly. It is great to read a poem with a positive outcome!
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Sarah, thank you for your honest feedback, I resolved a couple of rough patches.
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All best wishes from UK
Comment from Julie Lau
Thank you for sharing the time of blooming romance in your life. Congratulations on its success. Well done in your form of story-telling, a sort of story in verse format, very intriguing,
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you for sharing the time of blooming romance in your life. Congratulations on its success. Well done in your form of story-telling, a sort of story in verse format, very intriguing,
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Julie, than you. This is known in poetic style as "free-verse."