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A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
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Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, is the moral of this story buy a decent car Jim? He he he, I loved your sweet natured story in 1967 when you owned a chevy, I bet it would be worth a few bob today if you had kept it. A fine write full of fun-filled memories, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
Dolly, yes I would certainly love to have that chevy in the garage.
Comment from
shelley kaye
the girl's dad didn't come out of the house holding a shotgun? LOL!
this was a nice 'feel-good poem' about growing up memories...
thank you for sharing it
shelley ð?¦?
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
No mam, I was a lucky one that day.
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Sarah Das Gupta
A humorous touch here but not seen as amusing at the time, I guess! The picture is great and I feel for the writer in such a humiliating situation. Fathers rarely like their 'little daughter's' boyfriends!
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
Yup I was a real hand crusher with my two daughters boyfriends.
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 06-Apr-2023
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