Seasons of Change
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Comment from shelley kaye
I must make my retreat,
I walk toward an empty street.
LOL!
(i don't like busy streets lol)
anyway, great spring poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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I must make my retreat,
I walk toward an empty street.
LOL!
(i don't like busy streets lol)
anyway, great spring poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Shelley, you can make yours happen, I wll be certain to read it!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
NaPoMoWri going on. Step aside let authors be done, every day for the count of thirty. Keep going, straight ahead. You'll arrive at where you began for JLR has a plan.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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NaPoMoWri going on. Step aside let authors be done, every day for the count of thirty. Keep going, straight ahead. You'll arrive at where you began for JLR has a plan.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Ever onward, to the next series tomorrow!
Comment from pome lover
Wonderful!
Your second verse had me chuckling, and I smiled the rest of the way through.
Our weather keeps changing. One day the AC is on, the next, sweater weather and wind. Anything's better, though, than our humid, hundred and something degree summers. However, this spring is giving us variety, and plants and flowers are beautifu and birds are singing! Can't beat that.
I enjoyed your poem.
Katharine
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Wonderful!
Your second verse had me chuckling, and I smiled the rest of the way through.
Our weather keeps changing. One day the AC is on, the next, sweater weather and wind. Anything's better, though, than our humid, hundred and something degree summers. However, this spring is giving us variety, and plants and flowers are beautifu and birds are singing! Can't beat that.
I enjoyed your poem.
Katharine
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Katharine, thank you.
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hi there! This was an awesome poem! You did a great job matching it all up and rhyming! This picture you picked is also perfect. Thank you so much for sharing with us all!
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Hi there! This was an awesome poem! You did a great job matching it all up and rhyming! This picture you picked is also perfect. Thank you so much for sharing with us all!
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Gina, thank you for your comments,
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your welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here and the end rhymes and I don't want to bang on about it so much, but the metre is great in places and then falls short in other places, with a little tweaking if would be perfect, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed the sentiment here and the end rhymes and I don't want to bang on about it so much, but the metre is great in places and then falls short in other places, with a little tweaking if would be perfect, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Doly, thank you I will revisit this.