Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "I Am, You Are"A compilation of poems
35 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Thanks for taking us on a stroll through the land of the in- between. Transitioning from one season to another can be a bit confusing. We were at 85 degrees last week with sudden summer and are now back at 45. Back to winter! I enjoyed this read. Lovely artwork as well.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thanks for taking us on a stroll through the land of the in- between. Transitioning from one season to another can be a bit confusing. We were at 85 degrees last week with sudden summer and are now back at 45. Back to winter! I enjoyed this read. Lovely artwork as well.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you June so much for your review. I appreciate it more than you know you kind thoughts and for your insight also most valuable. I hope you get your eighty five degree weather back too have a great evening thanks again
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a beautiful poem you have written. You used some very creative imagery to capture the sights and sounds of the seasons. This should be a strong entry for this contest. Good luck. Terry.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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This is a beautiful poem you have written. You used some very creative imagery to capture the sights and sounds of the seasons. This should be a strong entry for this contest. Good luck. Terry.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you terry for your kind words and compliments! i'm very much appreciative. The changing seasons are often written about can be difficult planning a new view at times. However that's one spoke to me i'm glad it wasn't expected thank you again for your time! I hope you have an awesome afternoon.
Comment from BermyBye50
Lea,
This is an exceptional entry in the Free Form Poetry Contest. You've written a masterful free verse about the seasons. Your verses are are replete with creative lines and wonderful word choices. The imagery in your words paint exquisite pictures and show your talents as a wordsmith.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Lea,
This is an exceptional entry in the Free Form Poetry Contest. You've written a masterful free verse about the seasons. Your verses are are replete with creative lines and wonderful word choices. The imagery in your words paint exquisite pictures and show your talents as a wordsmith.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Eugene I'm honored and flattered by your kind words and by your excellent review. I am truly humbled I thank you very much for refine score for your kind Comments I take them to heart and feel very pleased and happy. Thank you very much for this have a great and wonderful day
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely free verse poem. I've read this several times and something new strikes me each time. I am impressed by your gorgeous imagery and and your use of metaphors and personification. Splendid work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely free verse poem. I've read this several times and something new strikes me each time. I am impressed by your gorgeous imagery and and your use of metaphors and personification. Splendid work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Mary again thank you I really am glad you liked this stuff. I am honored and privileged thank you,
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Lea,
firstly, love the way this poem takes my mind in two different directions. The personification of seasons and the possibility of the melding your words into a more personal connection... so yes, love the ambiguity that adds an extra depth to this free verse.
I also love the richness of content and language... nothing better than 'The tease of time's cryptic temper'.
When any writing demands the reader to read multiple times, then there is good reason behind this... it's damn good, something containing depth of heart and connection.
A beautifully composed and presented piece of art... all the very best in this free form poetry contest Lea.
With our thoughts we create...
transitional renewal.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Hi Lea,
firstly, love the way this poem takes my mind in two different directions. The personification of seasons and the possibility of the melding your words into a more personal connection... so yes, love the ambiguity that adds an extra depth to this free verse.
I also love the richness of content and language... nothing better than 'The tease of time's cryptic temper'.
When any writing demands the reader to read multiple times, then there is good reason behind this... it's damn good, something containing depth of heart and connection.
A beautifully composed and presented piece of art... all the very best in this free form poetry contest Lea.
With our thoughts we create...
transitional renewal.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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James amazing thank you again i'm just blown away!
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My Pleasure Lea.
Hope your day lays way for possibility and peace.
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Thank you again I thought about your amazing review and I think you deserve this
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My pleasure Lea. I love reading original composition, and your writing has a fresh flavour that steers away from the generic. Hope your night is a good one Lea.
Comment from prettybluebirds
The artwork you chose for this writing is perfect. I love the way you used I and you as metaphors in writing. It is lovely and creative work. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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The artwork you chose for this writing is perfect. I love the way you used I and you as metaphors in writing. It is lovely and creative work. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Thank you so very much I'm so glad you liked it. That resonates with people for your time and for your attention and your kind words thank you again. I hope you have a wonderful evening!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked the content in this poem. I went to look up loon grass but didn't find it. Sounds good anyway, though. Time is such a mystery, and how the seasons turn could be explained in so many ways. Is it a quiet change, or something in-between? This free-verse poem gives several possibilities.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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I liked the content in this poem. I went to look up loon grass but didn't find it. Sounds good anyway, though. Time is such a mystery, and how the seasons turn could be explained in so many ways. Is it a quiet change, or something in-between? This free-verse poem gives several possibilities.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Thank you again so glad you liked it and for the rating and for your time. I am amazed and happy thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem entry for the Free Form Poetry Contest. I love the way you use imagery and personification. ..."We are the bridge of blended suns rising. "
The free verse forced flows well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Excellent poem entry for the Free Form Poetry Contest. I love the way you use imagery and personification. ..."We are the bridge of blended suns rising. "
The free verse forced flows well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Once again you put the smile on my face thank you gypsy. I always appreciate you and everything you have to say constructive or otherwise. It's always blocking with me enjoy your afternoon I hope the sun's shining where you are!
Comment from Chrissy710
HI Lea This is really a lovely free verse and very nice alliteration throughout. I always look forward to Summer and the end of the cold icy winter. We are in Autumn at the moments so plenty of autumn flowers bowing to winter's gaze.. Good work
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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HI Lea This is really a lovely free verse and very nice alliteration throughout. I always look forward to Summer and the end of the cold icy winter. We are in Autumn at the moments so plenty of autumn flowers bowing to winter's gaze.. Good work
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Wow im glad you like this too! Excellent! Nice to see these are liked especially at a time when a person needs to smile and you gave that to me. I appreciate you so much thank you so much.
Comment from royowen
I love this style of the rich language, which tends to be stream of consciousness stuff, most of the stuff I write is as if I'm not writing it anyway, this is great writing Lea, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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I love this style of the rich language, which tends to be stream of consciousness stuff, most of the stuff I write is as if I'm not writing it anyway, this is great writing Lea, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you again Roy, glad you like! I hope your day is great!
For your time and for your kind review i'm always happy to receive!
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Most welckme
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Most welckme
