Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Seasons in Nature - II"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
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Comment from shelley kaye
i like darkness
the quiet is comforting
i do have a suggestion - maybe put the font the same colour as the flower in the picture?
just a thought!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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i like darkness
the quiet is comforting
i do have a suggestion - maybe put the font the same colour as the flower in the picture?
just a thought!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you Shelley.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a delightful poem to read as winter gives way to spring. Your descriptions of the inner workings of Mother Earth to bring flowers to new life are well written and make us appreciate even more the miraculous nature of spring.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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This is a delightful poem to read as winter gives way to spring. Your descriptions of the inner workings of Mother Earth to bring flowers to new life are well written and make us appreciate even more the miraculous nature of spring.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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My sincere thank you for your comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! Jim, you nailed it with this one and I just loved this descriptive free write, the sentiments and the resistance to change, but inevitably we all have to succumb and nature moves from winter to spring, a joyous and well worded poem from a talented pen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Wow! Jim, you nailed it with this one and I just loved this descriptive free write, the sentiments and the resistance to change, but inevitably we all have to succumb and nature moves from winter to spring, a joyous and well worded poem from a talented pen, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Dolly, thank you for tremendous six-star validation. Your words of praise are so precious. Jim
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You are welcome Jim, so well deserved x x x
Comment from vanya krieger
Really lovely imagery that definitely suits the theme and paints a vivid picture. I especially like "single streaming glow from above" though all the descriptions are very beautiful. Great work.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Really lovely imagery that definitely suits the theme and paints a vivid picture. I especially like "single streaming glow from above" though all the descriptions are very beautiful. Great work.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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My heartfelt thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Seasons in Nature, brings a passionate description of the transitional seasons and their effects on our world.
"clutches like a strong magnet"
"screaming in robust color"
Nice.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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This poem, Seasons in Nature, brings a passionate description of the transitional seasons and their effects on our world.
"clutches like a strong magnet"
"screaming in robust color"
Nice.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thanks for your validation, Bill. I truly value it.