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Tanka Collection

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Romantic Tanka Poems

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Comment from Douglas Goff
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Okay that is just too funny. I wonder how much ex girlfriend/boyfriend stuff actually gets tossed. I bet it is a lot.


Once again, great piece my friend.
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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Douglas. I appreciate your time and excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I like that the narrator saved a memento of a sweater that still smells of the loved one even though everything else is donated to Goodwill. There's still a souvenir of love to keep her warm in the winter.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    I love your reviews, you always 'get it'. Thank you for being such an exceptional reviewer and friend.

    Love,
    MariVal ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 02-Apr-2023
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Poem is telling the story that a woman saved one piece of clothing, a sweater, and gave the rest to Good Will. We also have Good Will here and I love to go shopping there. Like your poem.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    I worked for them for a couple of years. I taught office skills to destitute people. They are more than a thrift store. It's an amazing nonprofit organization.

    Thank you, Rosemarie. I appreciate your time and excellent review.

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Comment from aryr
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This was indeed a great Gogyohka poem, Gypsy. The picture was fantastic with the basket full of clothing. Your words were great. Your narrative notes were informative. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Aryr. I appreciate your time and excellent review. Blessed be.

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Comment from RodG
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You pack a lot of narrative into five short lines. We learn the Speaker still has strong feelings for her ex-lover, but she has not hesitated to dispose of MOST of his clothes. You do make us wonder why this relationship did not work out. Rod

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you, rod. I appreciate your time and excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Gogyohka poem - excellent picture presentation - poem flows well and has a cute story line - getting rid of the others old cloths- but saving one for the road - lol. Good job AP

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you, ap. I appreciate your time and excellent review.

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Comment from zanya
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Just a few short lines - yet they evoke so much sentiment and stir the imagination of the reader - just as quality poetry does-and sensory perception-powerful

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thank you, zanya. I appreciate your time and exceptional six stars review.

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Comment from patcelaw
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I enjoyed this haiku type poetry very much. It speaks to me because I lost my husband almost 28 years ago and I still miss him to this day. Have a blessed day and a good weekend. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    I'm sorry for your loss.

    Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your time and excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs