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15 words love poem12 total reviews
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Very interesting, keep it up. I wish you will. I would bring out the picture some and make it a little bit bigger, but overall, great job, great 15 words you. Great job.impact.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Very interesting, keep it up. I wish you will. I would bring out the picture some and make it a little bit bigger, but overall, great job, great 15 words you. Great job.impact.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely words said so thoughtfully in such a short verse form. I enjoyed the imagery of the light wind and its comparison with a lover's breath. The picture enhances the poem. Many thanks for sharing, Debbie
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Lovely words said so thoughtfully in such a short verse form. I enjoyed the imagery of the light wind and its comparison with a lover's breath. The picture enhances the poem. Many thanks for sharing, Debbie
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much.