Visions of Grandeur
My guilty pleasure15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I loved this! I'm glad it wasn't a blind contest because I wouldn't have read it as I have too many posts to read. This shows a boy with a vivid imagination, super daydreamer who can translate those dreams into books! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I loved this! I'm glad it wasn't a blind contest because I wouldn't have read it as I have too many posts to read. This shows a boy with a vivid imagination, super daydreamer who can translate those dreams into books! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
Or it shows a grown man suffering from arrested development and possessed by visions of grandeur. (smiley face here)
Comment from BethShelby
Wayne are you saying you don't want credit fot writing this story. I can't imagine why not. It is an excellent story and I would imagine your mother would be proud of your writing skills and who better to be the hero, but "the writer himself. I enjoyed it.]
It doesn't have to out until tomorrow morning. (to be out until....)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Wayne are you saying you don't want credit fot writing this story. I can't imagine why not. It is an excellent story and I would imagine your mother would be proud of your writing skills and who better to be the hero, but "the writer himself. I enjoyed it.]
It doesn't have to out until tomorrow morning. (to be out until....)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you. My comment was referring to being accused of actually 'being' Sylvester with visions of grandeur.
Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is great. It is of course the guilty pleasure of all of us here I think, although some of us manage it better than others. I think you would be very surprised if you saw my version of what goes on in my mind. kay
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is great. It is of course the guilty pleasure of all of us here I think, although some of us manage it better than others. I think you would be very surprised if you saw my version of what goes on in my mind. kay
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Smiley face here!
Thank you for your very kind review. And bless you for awarding six stars.
Comment from jessizero
I can understand wanting a piece to be blind, but this is something you should be proud of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I didn't see any errors or anything. As always, thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I can understand wanting a piece to be blind, but this is something you should be proud of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I didn't see any errors or anything. As always, thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
My wish for it to be blind is a fear that I am, indeed, Sylvester.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This read as though a young boy wrote it, probably Sly when not doing dangerous work for the President.
I like your one and done stories, more variety this way.
Take care!
Pam
It doesn't have to go out until tomorrow morning. You're missing GO.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This read as though a young boy wrote it, probably Sly when not doing dangerous work for the President.
I like your one and done stories, more variety this way.
Take care!
Pam
It doesn't have to go out until tomorrow morning. You're missing GO.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
And thank you for the catch.
A lot of pressure to produce on 'one and done', though.