PM, I am bursting forth!
A Poem of thanks and celebration41 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh my what a point in peace point and lovely and hopeful and strong message and a reminder to us. Our house is fleeting and therefore we must maintain it as best as we can to have the best out of life that we can and in this world. It's a tough one. I hope you're feeling OK and that you have a great day. This submission is gorgeous very well done ah obviously by a talented writer! I can find no issues whatsoever with spelling Grammar subject matter sentence structure all in line and very well done. The pictures pretty cool too I like the colors. I hope you have a great day and good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Oh my what a point in peace point and lovely and hopeful and strong message and a reminder to us. Our house is fleeting and therefore we must maintain it as best as we can to have the best out of life that we can and in this world. It's a tough one. I hope you're feeling OK and that you have a great day. This submission is gorgeous very well done ah obviously by a talented writer! I can find no issues whatsoever with spelling Grammar subject matter sentence structure all in line and very well done. The pictures pretty cool too I like the colors. I hope you have a great day and good luck!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Lea, thank you for your kind words of validation.
Comment from Ulla
I'm so pleased for you that you now have a PM. I'm also glad you explained what a PM was. In British English a PM is a Prime Minister and that didn't make much sense.
I loved your uplifting poem. It's so full of joy. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I'm so pleased for you that you now have a PM. I'm also glad you explained what a PM was. In British English a PM is a Prime Minister and that didn't make much sense.
I loved your uplifting poem. It's so full of joy. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Ulla yes a bit of irony impossed for sure. I know not many in the body politic that could bring this much joy,
Comment from Aussie
Happy days are here again, the sun is shining through. PM working away keeping your heart shiny new. Amazing machine measures your beats, now you can be a drummer too! K xx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Happy days are here again, the sun is shining through. PM working away keeping your heart shiny new. Amazing machine measures your beats, now you can be a drummer too! K xx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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K Smiles and yes the snare drum beats steady now!
Comment from Wendy G
That's wonderful news - do good to hear that you will have a new surging burst of energy and full life. I am glad you explained who the PM was who moved in. In Australia we refer to our Prime Minister as the PM. Lol. I needed your notes, then I reread it, and saw how clever it was. Well done. Stay well. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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That's wonderful news - do good to hear that you will have a new surging burst of energy and full life. I am glad you explained who the PM was who moved in. In Australia we refer to our Prime Minister as the PM. Lol. I needed your notes, then I reread it, and saw how clever it was. Well done. Stay well. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Wendy, yes a bit of irony impossed for sure. I know not many in the body politic that could bring this much joy, thank you, Jim with a grateful heart. 💓
Comment from karenina
Blessings to you! Those PMs are handy little miracles, aren't they? A new lease on life!
Your free verse is joyous in your exuberance to embrace every moment of life!
I love the term "Oversoul" -- how happy I am that your "higher spiritual self" remains with us, in this life to inspire with your verse!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Blessings to you! Those PMs are handy little miracles, aren't they? A new lease on life!
Your free verse is joyous in your exuberance to embrace every moment of life!
I love the term "Oversoul" -- how happy I am that your "higher spiritual self" remains with us, in this life to inspire with your verse!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Karenina, yes abit of irony impossed for sure. Thank you so much, I never thought turning sevety three tomorrow would have this much meaning ....💓💓
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Happy birthday to you... HAppy birthday to you!
(I'd keep singing but my voice would likely crack my laptop screen...)
Woo hoo!
Seventy-three!
I'm "on the cusp" of seventy...so watch out, I'm nipping at your heels!!
Enjoy your day! (Maybe more than you ever thought you would!)
As an RN I've seen PaceMakers snatch souls from the outstretched fingers of the Grim Reaper...
Not your time!
Keep writing my friend!
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Bless you and keep you nestled in His
Loving's hands. Thank for your being a gifted care provider.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very witty and imaginative!!! It takes courage and boldness to write such positive stuff when one considers that the heart is such a precious and fragile thing. PM has saved millions to this day, and I wish you LOng, Long life, dear!!!
mario
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Very witty and imaginative!!! It takes courage and boldness to write such positive stuff when one considers that the heart is such a precious and fragile thing. PM has saved millions to this day, and I wish you LOng, Long life, dear!!!
mario
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
An awesome poem of victory over a heart that may have had some serious problems. This seems to describe a person reaching out and finding both healing and joy. This poem us jubilant, forceful and triumphant! Excellent job!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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An awesome poem of victory over a heart that may have had some serious problems. This seems to describe a person reaching out and finding both healing and joy. This poem us jubilant, forceful and triumphant! Excellent job!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem, very real and heartfelt. I'm glad the surgery went well. I had a friend that had a pacemaker and it really helped him. Thank God!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Excellent poem, very real and heartfelt. I'm glad the surgery went well. I had a friend that had a pacemaker and it really helped him. Thank God!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Yes, thank God.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Congratulations on what sounds like a successful and life-changing procedure. Thank you for taking me along your joyful and relief filled ride. Glad to see you are back writing. The world needs your words.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Congratulations on what sounds like a successful and life-changing procedure. Thank you for taking me along your joyful and relief filled ride. Glad to see you are back writing. The world needs your words.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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thanks much!
Comment from John Ciarmello
Health issues are always scary, especially one of your magnitude, JLR.
This was beautifully and graciously written. I wish you the best with your health and success with this entry. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Health issues are always scary, especially one of your magnitude, JLR.
This was beautifully and graciously written. I wish you the best with your health and success with this entry. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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thank you very much john, sorry for the lack of caps typing with one hand for awhile. all is good!