A Poetic Pause
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Comment from royowen
What an excellent entry in this poetry contest my friend, not only have you written the right amount of words, but the artwork and the prevention are excellent, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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What an excellent entry in this poetry contest my friend, not only have you written the right amount of words, but the artwork and the prevention are excellent, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! I appreciate you taking the time to have a look at my park and offer your comments Thank you so much have a great day!
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Most welcome
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A nice little poem. And a good point. The train's path is already chosen, and inevitable. Fighting it will do no good, and enjoying the ride will not hurt. All we can do as the conductor of our own train is make choices as we reach the switching yards.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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A nice little poem. And a good point. The train's path is already chosen, and inevitable. Fighting it will do no good, and enjoying the ride will not hurt. All we can do as the conductor of our own train is make choices as we reach the switching yards.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your review. Thank you for taking the time looking at it and I'll bear comments. I really appreciate I need all comments and I'm happy to hear that there's anything. I need to make better I'm thinking you again. I really appreciate you taking the time to have yourself a great day
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
This is a great entry. I love the message and you did a wonderful just clearly stating it in the very few words allowed. It's a better, more profound way of saying if you can't beat em, join em. Well done :)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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This is a great entry. I love the message and you did a wonderful just clearly stating it in the very few words allowed. It's a better, more profound way of saying if you can't beat em, join em. Well done :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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You hit the nail on the head shocked at what I was saying and thank you so much for taking the time to read it and say your comments and kind words always appreciate it hope you have yourself good evening!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The minute we accept something we cannot change is the moment we move on and enjoy life. We cannot always change the status quo, but we can work with it. I found it hard to accept that England left the EU and I still cry about it to this day, but I have accepted it even though the restrictions levied against the Brits are enormous and devastating now. Wise words here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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The minute we accept something we cannot change is the moment we move on and enjoy life. We cannot always change the status quo, but we can work with it. I found it hard to accept that England left the EU and I still cry about it to this day, but I have accepted it even though the restrictions levied against the Brits are enormous and devastating now. Wise words here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you to all. I appreciate your your candor and your honesty is always refreshing feeling and I always enjoy your work too. I thank you for taking the time again to look at what I write and for your comments always appreciate it. I hope your evening is great and your favorite show is on what you're doing your favorite thing...