Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very true. I like that sentiment and the photo you chose pairs well with your words, which are lyrical and romantic. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much, Wendy!!

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

picture is from It´s a Wonderful Life. One of my all time favorites...Donna Reed. That scene just ripped your heart out. Great entry. Best of luck in the prompt.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much Kaiku!

reply by Kaiku on 11-Mar-2023

smile

Comment from Celtic Angel

Excellent

Nicely done in 12 words. Expresses mood and captures the depth of love beyond the spoken word. I like the word "magical" to reflect the experience--especially of newfangled love..

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!!

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is a sweet and skillfully written short poem. I love the artwork you attached. It adds even more to the meaning of the words you have written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I like this poem quite a lot. Today, we too often confuse eroticism with romanticism. This poem and the picture reflects a time when the movies on the big screen weren't erotic, but truly romantic. I miss those days.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You have used your 12 words well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the nature of love
as a "magical place."
-I like the concluding lines, too.
-A good entry; good luck.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks so much Pam!

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Mar-2023

You are very welcome.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twelve-word poem, Unspoken, has the proper formatting and speaks of the zone where lovers no longer express their love with words. Nice..................

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023

Thanks so much Bill!