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Adopted By Unknown Stranger In Wal-Mart Parking Lo

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Another great installment in your autobiograph. I am really enjoying this. I haven't felt as anxious since the chapters have revolved around Dusty and Country Comfort. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


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    Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is really good and fluid Reed. I was able to follow along without issue. I was carried along from the first word to the last word and to me this is the mark of a good writer. I suspect this story is much deeper and brother and a lot of human interests could be generated I think.
They say right about what you know and who knows it's better than ourselves. Errors in grammar sentence structure spelling punctuation and no existing errors as far as I can tell. I'm interested to see what happens next! Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


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    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from jmdg1954
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I'm one of the new readers and I found myself captivated in this post. With a smooth, warm flow of words the story came to life as I read it.

I'm sorry to have missed the prior posts.
John

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


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    Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I can see you learned a lot of valuable life lessons from Dusty. I am sure God sent him to be in your life.

Dusty seized the opportunity and said, "I know all about your lackadaisical, (I would put a period after 'opportunity' and omit 'and said')

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Appreciate the suggestion and the review.