Haunting of Past Sins
Thanks to my granddaughter, Kenzie for her Amazing Artwork46 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I guess this was for a blind contest? Love Kenzie's amazing artwork! What a great contrast of spirals and straight lines. I like your rhyming couplet that shows us that our bedtimes can bring up troubles from the past. Congratulations on your second place finish. (I just checked!)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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I guess this was for a blind contest? Love Kenzie's amazing artwork! What a great contrast of spirals and straight lines. I like your rhyming couplet that shows us that our bedtimes can bring up troubles from the past. Congratulations on your second place finish. (I just checked!)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Hi Helen, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my dear friend.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Holy smokes! If I wasn't so dag-nabbit poor, I'd ask if she would like to illustrate my next book! Your grandaughter's art is outstanding! (So is your poem, but my last six won't do anything to promote it, so I will save it for the next piece I meet that is worthy, k? xxoo) :)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Holy smokes! If I wasn't so dag-nabbit poor, I'd ask if she would like to illustrate my next book! Your grandaughter's art is outstanding! (So is your poem, but my last six won't do anything to promote it, so I will save it for the next piece I meet that is worthy, k? xxoo) :)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Lol, hope you know I wasn't begging for reviews. Haha! I just can tell you really liked her art. I can't use her work as often as I like, because her portfolio is that of a tattoo artist. But actually we just talked before her trip to Europe. if I ever figure out how to do the Amazon books, when she gets home she will be coming over to talk about illustrating my book. But I don't even know where to start, Do you start by editing them and putting them in a book here?
And I love your sweet comments. I will tell Kenzie about you. She loves hearing things like that. Thank you again my sweet friend.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Another piece of fantastic artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Please tell Kenzie I am enjoying it and hope she has a good avenue to excel in.
-You have used your 10 words well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of "bedtime's darkness" and the
reason for the fear in the second line.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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-Another piece of fantastic artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Please tell Kenzie I am enjoying it and hope she has a good avenue to excel in.
-You have used your 10 words well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of "bedtime's darkness" and the
reason for the fear in the second line.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Hi Pam, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my dear friend.
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You are very welcome, Debi, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Spitfire
This well-constructed couplets make a point, debi. Consonance with the s sound in bedtime's darkness, past and sins. Alliteration also with the s sound. Good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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This well-constructed couplets make a point, debi. Consonance with the s sound in bedtime's darkness, past and sins. Alliteration also with the s sound. Good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Hey Shari, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my dear friend.
Comment from Kaiku
saw this entry in the prompt and the graphic as well as the words were very well done. not always an easy thing to convey such a strong message in so few words. good job
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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saw this entry in the prompt and the graphic as well as the words were very well done. not always an easy thing to convey such a strong message in so few words. good job
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Hi Kailua, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my dear friend.
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Comment from rjuselius
This is so true dear anonymous! Dreams follow the past sentiments. Bravo, perfectly written and presented!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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This is so true dear anonymous! Dreams follow the past sentiments. Bravo, perfectly written and presented!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Oh Rebekka, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews.
Your kind words are always so appreciated. Then you made it complete with the generous gift of six stars. It's like the full meal deal in a review. It doesn't get any better than that. Thank you once again my dear friend.
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My pleasure entirely dear debi <3
Comment from papa55mike
Memories do flood in at night when we still our hearts and the mind takes over. Abuses that I endured surface. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Memories do flood in at night when we still our hearts and the mind takes over. Abuses that I endured surface. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Oh Mike, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
Comment from Terry Broxson
You only get ten words, and I think you chose some good ones to make a thought-provoking poem. I do think you have some wisdom with the poem. Good luck in the contest. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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You only get ten words, and I think you chose some good ones to make a thought-provoking poem. I do think you have some wisdom with the poem. Good luck in the contest. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Awe Thank you Terry. I appreciate your kind comments my dear friend!
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Interesting, when I reviewed the poem, it was in a blind contest, I had no idea who wrote it! The contest says this entry is waiting to be entered.
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The contest just got over.
I can surprise you after all!
Haha! I just added that the art was more of my granddaughter's amazing art.
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I see you tied for second. I realize that is below your standards...LOL.
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Haha! I am fine with that. But what I am not fine with is it looks like Jessica and I split the second place winnings and the third place got the whole amount. They could have at least split it three ways. Don't you think?
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I have heard that complaint before.
Comment from patricia dillon
The "terrors of the night" are proverbial. It is easy to imagine all kinds of monsters lurking in the darkness, whether or not they arise from a uneasy conscience. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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The "terrors of the night" are proverbial. It is easy to imagine all kinds of monsters lurking in the darkness, whether or not they arise from a uneasy conscience. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Oh Patricia, I thank you so very much for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews.
Your kind words are always so appreciated. Then you made it complete with the generous gift of six stars. It's like the full meal deal in a review. It doesn't get any better than that. Thank you once again my dear friend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and choices. The poem flows nicely and you give good advice.
I like your amazing presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. .
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and choices. The poem flows nicely and you give good advice.
I like your amazing presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. .
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I thank you so very much MaryVale, for your kind comments for my haunting past sins poem and for always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.