Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Debi, This is a very nice and very well written poem for Pam. I hate that her husband is having health issues. You used very good descriptive and loving words. I wish her the best with all she has going on! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023

Teri, I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
Thank you again, my dear friend.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent tribute to Pam. Your words show how both of have a strong connection to each other which is wonderful. Best wishes to Pam and I hope her husband is okay.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Debi, this is such a lovely tribute to Pam Lonsdale who has become a good friend of yours. I'm sorry to here that her husband has some health issues.. all best, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Nicely done, Debi. I'm sending out a prayer for Pam's husband. Good job on the five line stanzas and the rhyme. Were you born in the same year?

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is such a lovely, thoughtful poem for of our own who needs time with her husband and her writing skills. (although I think her writing is lovely already!) We are a true family on FS, and I think it's the only one in existence. I really enjoyed your poem, Debi, it's just like you to be so thoughtful. :)) Sandra xxxx

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is so cool: "We have exact amount of days on Earth, our life's platform" I'm glad you will still have some contact. It is terrible when we make such good friends, then they move along.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023

Comment from LateBloomer

Exceptional

Hi Debi, this is a wonderful tribute to Pam, a FS favorite. Your poem reads and flows well, and your admiration for Pam shines through.

I especially liked:
We are the Bobsy Twins, but there is something you don't know
Now we're actually triplets, 'cause another joined the show

(The same birth date is so very cool.)

Good rhyming. Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Xo. M

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023

I thought I had written to you for this one, but I bet I forgot to make sure it was saved. Anyway I thank you my lovely SOTU for the lovely comments and the special six stars for this piece. Yours is coming soon, just have to ask a couple questions first. Thanks again sweet sis.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

A sweet poem for your friend, Pam. Sorry to hear her husband has health issues. I'm glad Pam is able to work on improving her writing skills. Is she taking a class? You used some great rhymes in your poem. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Exceptional

Thank you for this wonderful tribute for Pam. We will miss this wonderful writer and friend. I also enjoy her stories. They have been very inspirational, filled with knowledge.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023

Thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem. I also truly thank you for the six stars that you honored us with, as I know Pam is a friend of yours as well. You are a sweetheart! They are so appreciated, my dear friend!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

What a lovely tribute to Pam, who is indeed a gifted writer. And so lovely to share a birthday, that is doubly special. Your poem is well written, with very smooth rhyme and metre. I join you in wishing Pam well for her future writing and also for her husband's health.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023