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Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. I dropped in after you started writing this book. This is such a hopeful chapter for one young boy.I look forward to reading more. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. I dropped in after you started writing this book. This is such a hopeful chapter for one young boy.I look forward to reading more. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent chapter. I can imagine what a great turn of events this was for you after you had given hope that anything good might come of your life. I imagine Dusty was hoping he would be able to do this. He must have questioned the wisdom of taking on a 12 year kid and wondering what he might be getting himself into. I love the way you ended this chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. I can imagine what a great turn of events this was for you after you had given hope that anything good might come of your life. I imagine Dusty was hoping he would be able to do this. He must have questioned the wisdom of taking on a 12 year kid and wondering what he might be getting himself into. I love the way you ended this chapter.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I thought it was Saturday, but alas it was Sunday and too late I realized that after I had spent all my sixes. Therefore I have pumped your chapter up a couple of points to help celebrate your escape from Heritage Hall and King Tubbo. Well done! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I thought it was Saturday, but alas it was Sunday and too late I realized that after I had spent all my sixes. Therefore I have pumped your chapter up a couple of points to help celebrate your escape from Heritage Hall and King Tubbo. Well done! Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
What an incredibly unlikely happening in this episode. You've given hope to the hopeless, faith to the faithless, and to those that although rare, compassion and destiny sometimes happen, the superintendent can't possibly believe it, although I suspect his time is coming, beautifully written Brett, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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What an incredibly unlikely happening in this episode. You've given hope to the hopeless, faith to the faithless, and to those that although rare, compassion and destiny sometimes happen, the superintendent can't possibly believe it, although I suspect his time is coming, beautifully written Brett, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
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A pleasure
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Brett, I've been waiting for this chapter and here it finally is. You certainly took your sweet old time before releasing this. I'm so glad you did though. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Aw, Brett, I've been waiting for this chapter and here it finally is. You certainly took your sweet old time before releasing this. I'm so glad you did though. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Had to step away from FanStory for awhile on a personal matter. But, with any luck that criminal situation (of which I am the victim, not the perp) is at least for now behind me and I can return to posting what I need to again. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
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That sounds a bit ominous, but I'm glad you're back. Ulla:)))
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Some idiot tried to open an electricity account in Houston, Texas in my name. Needless to say had to change all my financial accounts, credit cards, put a block on my SSA account, and several other pain in the neck things that have to be done in a situation like that just to protect yourself.
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Oh Brett, I couldn't help laughing, although it's hardly a laughing matter.. I'm so sorry this should happen to you. I hope you didn't lose anything. What a pain in the proverbial backside. No wonder you were late with your story. Ulla:)))
Comment from GWHARGIS
I was so pleased to find this post in my messages. I was afraid you had abandoned this series. The fine line between the thirteen year old bravado on the outside differing from the excitement of the internal emotion was well displayed. I am really enjoying this series. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I was so pleased to find this post in my messages. I was afraid you had abandoned this series. The fine line between the thirteen year old bravado on the outside differing from the excitement of the internal emotion was well displayed. I am really enjoying this series. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition to the story with us. I really enjoyed reading. I like this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
Sometimes, silence is not golden no matter what people may wish to claim. (AMEN!!)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this addition to the story with us. I really enjoyed reading. I like this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
Sometimes, silence is not golden no matter what people may wish to claim. (AMEN!!)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.