Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

That's quite clever! Very well done! Your word choice is great and I quite like it! I might change the picture though just something more "quest" looking. I get the vision in my head like The Lord of the Rings little hobbit dudes to enter the forest with their back packs. 9f course you don't have to use that but it's a thought. Having said that I did quite enjoy it! I was pretty surprised because it's so hard to do so great job!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Brandon Clark

Excellent

Very good! Your word choice was obviously very well thought out and considered as it conveys your message clearly. Font size, colors and image, give it an ambience that works well with the topic.

I wish you the best of luck in the contest and well done!
Brandon

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Carlie Beth

Excellent

This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem. Incredible how you conveyed a strong poem with a clear story with such little words. I loved the rhymes as well. Well done! Keep working!!

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023

Thank you very much