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Monostitch - One Line19 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This definitely says it in just one line! I love the idea of pearls of wisdom found in an ocean of words. This is the crux of how it appears to others when they write a few words and say so much!
Thank you for sharing this wise and thoughtful poem!
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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This definitely says it in just one line! I love the idea of pearls of wisdom found in an ocean of words. This is the crux of how it appears to others when they write a few words and say so much!
Thank you for sharing this wise and thoughtful poem!
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Again, I am late in responding, as usual but THANK YOU for your appreciation of my short poem and for the sparkling six stars. Your comments bring more meaning to my efforts on writing. Blessings to you ~DDxo
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No worries about being late. You are welcome, as always.
Jesse
Comment from Sanku
Great ppresentation. Very true .There is an ocean out there in the literary world and you can gather pearls of wisdom by reading in depth.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Great ppresentation. Very true .There is an ocean out there in the literary world and you can gather pearls of wisdom by reading in depth.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Sanku. I appreciate your review on my one line piece. Happy Sunday. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, DD.
-You have written a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "an ocean of words" and concluding
the thought with the "pearls of wisdom.
-A very good, positive message.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, DD.
-You have written a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "an ocean of words" and concluding
the thought with the "pearls of wisdom.
-A very good, positive message.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Pam. Your review on my one line was supportive and much appreciated. Happy Sunday. ~DDxo
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You are very welcome, DD, and you have a great Sunday, too. It is very windy and chilly here. April came in in a big way with thunderstorms last night.
Comment from royowen
I like the metaphor of the ocean of words producing pearls of wisdom, and. I Think that you have a real good chance in this contest, these are tough to do, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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I like the metaphor of the ocean of words producing pearls of wisdom, and. I Think that you have a real good chance in this contest, these are tough to do, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your thoughtful review on my one line. Many thanks and happy Sunday. ~DD
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My pleasure
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your mono stitch.
I like the themed linking between the ocean/pearls and words/wisdom at either end of the sentence.
Very nicely written and presented.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your mono stitch.
I like the themed linking between the ocean/pearls and words/wisdom at either end of the sentence.
Very nicely written and presented.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Debra, I appreciate your thoughtful review on my one line. Many thanks and happy Sunday. ~DD :-)
Comment from Pantygynt
Congratulations on writing a genuine one liner. This is only thirteen syllables long, looks and sounds like a single line. Too many of these entries are really crowded and only technical one liners. This is well done.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Congratulations on writing a genuine one liner. This is only thirteen syllables long, looks and sounds like a single line. Too many of these entries are really crowded and only technical one liners. This is well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you :-). Always appreciate your knowledgeable reviews, Jim. Happy Sunday. ~DD
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was excellent! You've taken the pearls from the ocean and made a complete story in that one line poem, very well done, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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That was excellent! You've taken the pearls from the ocean and made a complete story in that one line poem, very well done, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Sandra, for your thoughtful review on my one line :-) Have a blessed Sunday. ~DDxo
Comment from jenintorre
I really like your one line poem and think it is a very good contender for the competition. Very profound. I keep looking at the artwork but can't make out what it is. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Best wishes. Jen.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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I really like your one line poem and think it is a very good contender for the competition. Very profound. I keep looking at the artwork but can't make out what it is. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Best wishes. Jen.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Jen. I know it is hard to write a review longer than the one line piece posted. I appreciate your comments. ~DD
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
With just the few words and a compelling graphic, a simple truth. As we go through our days, it's nearly impossible to hear complete silence. Instead we have talking heads speaking of news stories, then discussions about the discussions of the news stories. And then there is all of the other talking. Then, a little child will say, "I'm tired, Mommy; can we go home?" Or some voice over on a commercial will say, "Have you told some one you love them today?" Or a singer will end a concert with, "Peace Now!"
Your little poem made me think of all that and more. If only we could have days filled with all the pearls and less of the endless filler. Great writing. :)
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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With just the few words and a compelling graphic, a simple truth. As we go through our days, it's nearly impossible to hear complete silence. Instead we have talking heads speaking of news stories, then discussions about the discussions of the news stories. And then there is all of the other talking. Then, a little child will say, "I'm tired, Mommy; can we go home?" Or some voice over on a commercial will say, "Have you told some one you love them today?" Or a singer will end a concert with, "Peace Now!"
Your little poem made me think of all that and more. If only we could have days filled with all the pearls and less of the endless filler. Great writing. :)
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Alexandra, for taking the time to review my one line. Your comments were thoughtful and thorough and much appreciated. I am pleased you were taken on a journey by my few words. ~DD