A Poetic Pause
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Seasons End"First Poems
26 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to say Summer was my favorite. Now autumn is. I love the vibrant colors and the distinctive smells. The first smell of smoke from the chimney. The smell of leaves rotting. It is unlike any other season. You captured the remarkable and unique qualities of the season. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I used to say Summer was my favorite. Now autumn is. I love the vibrant colors and the distinctive smells. The first smell of smoke from the chimney. The smell of leaves rotting. It is unlike any other season. You captured the remarkable and unique qualities of the season. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Gretchen for your kind words. I really appreciate it and for you taking the time to have a look and off your comments. Is also greatly appreciate.. I thank you for the review and stars that you've given me again. I am most grateful and I wish you all the best!
Comment from royowen
The thing I love about poetry is it's although it's still "thoughts on paper" it's more likely to be a stream of consciousness than a prose essay, and frequently a little more elegant, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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The thing I love about poetry is it's although it's still "thoughts on paper" it's more likely to be a stream of consciousness than a prose essay, and frequently a little more elegant, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you Roy I'm so glad you like it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review it and for your compliments I am greatly appreciative. Thank you again I hope you have a great evening!
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest.
Haiku is my favorite poetic form because it's so visual. Your rhyming Poem is like that. You describe nature beautifully.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Excellent poem entry for the Rhyming Poetry Contest.
Haiku is my favorite poetic form because it's so visual. Your rhyming Poem is like that. You describe nature beautifully.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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That's great thank you very much. I'm really pleased this show. I'm still a little hesitant but you are making it very easy. Thank you and have a fabulous day!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and entertaining. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and entertaining. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much I'm really glad. You liked it and I appreciate you taking the time to review and provide your comment. S thank you very much again and I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Destiny Awaits Darling
I absolutely adore this poem! Your writing style is refreshingly unique, and your use imagery really gets across your feelings about autumn. I think my favorite part of it all, though, was that by describing autumn, you also expressed your feelings for summer-- which I think really added to the substance of the poem, as a whole.
Great work, lovely lady! Good luck on the contest! I will be keeping my eye out for when voting comes around! <3
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I absolutely adore this poem! Your writing style is refreshingly unique, and your use imagery really gets across your feelings about autumn. I think my favorite part of it all, though, was that by describing autumn, you also expressed your feelings for summer-- which I think really added to the substance of the poem, as a whole.
Great work, lovely lady! Good luck on the contest! I will be keeping my eye out for when voting comes around! <3
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much. It's really kind of you to say. I really appreciate you taking the time to look at my writings and to offer your comments always appreciated by me. Suggestions for change anything a reviewer has to say like yourself will fall on welcome ears.
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You are so so welcome! You are so very deserving of this encouragement, and all that I have said! I love that you are humble in your talent (which is shown by your welcoming of constructive criticism), but still confident. <3
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Thank you again!
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You?re so welcome!!
Comment from jmdg1954
Living here in New Jersey, aka the Garden State, those fall colors start earlier in the northern part of the state followed by about two weeks later in the southern part of the state.
All the colors you wrote about plus more.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
John
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Living here in New Jersey, aka the Garden State, those fall colors start earlier in the northern part of the state followed by about two weeks later in the southern part of the state.
All the colors you wrote about plus more.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
John
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and offering your comments. I very much appreciate it and hope you're having a fabulous day!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Lea.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the alternating long and short lines.
-Good personification of the gopher and
eagles in "gymnastic skies."
-Good description of the seasons
and a good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Lea.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the alternating long and short lines.
-Good personification of the gopher and
eagles in "gymnastic skies."
-Good description of the seasons
and a good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you Pam. I really appreciate your valuation looking at this taking a time to comment. It is very much welcomed and appreciated I thank you again and wish you a special evening!
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You are very welcome, Lea. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You have a way with words herein. Well done. I wish you luck in this contest.
Cherry? or Cheery. Either works. At first, I thought, the second was what was writ but perhaps not.
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You have a way with words herein. Well done. I wish you luck in this contest.
Cherry? or Cheery. Either works. At first, I thought, the second was what was writ but perhaps not.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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It is cherry yes.. I like the idea of smashing words together just to see what happens.
Thank you very much for your review and for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it a lot and I hope you're having a great evening thanks again!
Comment from Julcia
The stunning artwork is a visual
taken by the author's talented hands. It is a preamble to the sounds of the changing seasons,
spring to fall in this rhyming poem.
I had trouble understanding why
purple breeze is the only concept
emphasized. A moving read.
Julcia
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The stunning artwork is a visual
taken by the author's talented hands. It is a preamble to the sounds of the changing seasons,
spring to fall in this rhyming poem.
I had trouble understanding why
purple breeze is the only concept
emphasized. A moving read.
Julcia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I think that's a formatting thing. I'm going to have to go in and unbold the purple breeze. Somehow if I can wouldn't let me before but I shall try by the way. Thank you so much for your reply. I appreciate your comments and the time you take to read them. I hope you have a great night thank you again!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed reading your poem. Your poem depicts your feelings about the colors of nature. Very well written. Nicely done. You paint quite a vivid picture with your words. I loved the imagery in your poem. This is a great rhyming poem for the contest. Good luck in the contest. Your poem was definitely a nice poem about the changing seasons. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Your poem depicts your feelings about the colors of nature. Very well written. Nicely done. You paint quite a vivid picture with your words. I loved the imagery in your poem. This is a great rhyming poem for the contest. Good luck in the contest. Your poem was definitely a nice poem about the changing seasons. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jacqueline for your fine review I really appreciate it! For taking the time to read it and I'll be. Your comments is always valuable to me. I really hope that everything you do when you write Is a personal success for you! Thank you again I really appreciate your time have a great night!
