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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
I like the way you grab the reader's attention right away and keep us in suspense until the end.
Nice work.
Whether male or female everyone had a "Karen" in their lives.
Good luck
Cindy
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Author,
I like the way you grab the reader's attention right away and keep us in suspense until the end.
Nice work.
Whether male or female everyone had a "Karen" in their lives.
Good luck
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from royowen
I liked this, a great finish, the beginning was hairy, and one thought the argument was all on Karen's side, when really it wasnt like that at all. A super read, I wasn't expecting the ending, some people are like that. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
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I liked this, a great finish, the beginning was hairy, and one thought the argument was all on Karen's side, when really it wasnt like that at all. A super read, I wasn't expecting the ending, some people are like that. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The story here is really excellent, and it's a great twist that this supposedly uncaring male listened so carefully to everything that Karen had to say. You just need a tad more care with the editing, and you'd be flaunting with a six star rating. kay
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The story here is really excellent, and it's a great twist that this supposedly uncaring male listened so carefully to everything that Karen had to say. You just need a tad more care with the editing, and you'd be flaunting with a six star rating. kay
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, sound like it could have been a case of justified homicide if he decided to go that way. It is a good story. Dang, I am glad I got old and don't date anymore.
One note, I think you intend her birthday to be on April 2, the first would be April Fool's day.
Excellent writing. Terry.
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LOL, sound like it could have been a case of justified homicide if he decided to go that way. It is a good story. Dang, I am glad I got old and don't date anymore.
One note, I think you intend her birthday to be on April 2, the first would be April Fool's day.
Excellent writing. Terry.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here with this story and this woman did sound a bit crazy and after pulling a stunt like this you could never trust her again! A well written and realistic story, I hung onto your every word here, I was entertained, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here with this story and this woman did sound a bit crazy and after pulling a stunt like this you could never trust her again! A well written and realistic story, I hung onto your every word here, I was entertained, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023