One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from patcelaw
This one is very well done. The picture reminds me of a time when I lived in Las Cruces, New Mexico, where the birds were all lined up on the powerline as they were lined up they saw a hawk coming after them, and they all took off at once. It made such a racket. It was unbelievable how noisy it was with hundreds of birds flying out lol at one time. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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This one is very well done. The picture reminds me of a time when I lived in Las Cruces, New Mexico, where the birds were all lined up on the powerline as they were lined up they saw a hawk coming after them, and they all took off at once. It made such a racket. It was unbelievable how noisy it was with hundreds of birds flying out lol at one time. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- excellent picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- clever idea for a poem- birds watching people watching birds- wonder what they are thinking?? What beautiful marking on that red one with blue head feathers!!
Good job AP
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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I like your haiku poem- excellent picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- clever idea for a poem- birds watching people watching birds- wonder what they are thinking?? What beautiful marking on that red one with blue head feathers!!
Good job AP
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's so cute! The birds could be watching us. But if I go under a bunch of birds on a wire, I am sure to either wear a hat or walk by really fast - just in case. Enjoyed your take on the birds people watching!
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Lol. That's so cute! The birds could be watching us. But if I go under a bunch of birds on a wire, I am sure to either wear a hat or walk by really fast - just in case. Enjoyed your take on the birds people watching!
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Hehehe. I'm glad you get the humor. Thank you for reading and reviewing, big sister.
Marival ❤️