The Error of His Ways
Consequences of drunkenness.13 total reviews
Comment from RodG
This poem made me chuckle. You characterized him very well in the opening stanza and we like how she confronts him and gives him her decree. Excellent use of end and internal rhyme. And your use of the required words was natural. Well done! Rod
  |
This poem made me chuckle. You characterized him very well in the opening stanza and we like how she confronts him and gives him her decree. Excellent use of end and internal rhyme. And your use of the required words was natural. Well done! Rod
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! I like how this author describes so well the consequences
of drunkenness. As I read on, I liked how the author stated in the last
paragraph the effects of consequences. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great and made me smile! Great Poem!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
Excellent Poem! I like how this author describes so well the consequences
of drunkenness. As I read on, I liked how the author stated in the last
paragraph the effects of consequences. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great and made me smile! Great Poem!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
Comment from royowen
I remember a friend of mine had the very same issue, she said, it's me or the booze! He chose the booze, the stayed together, but in seperate rooms, their love life became an arrangement, well done, great entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
I remember a friend of mine had the very same issue, she said, it's me or the booze! He chose the booze, the stayed together, but in seperate rooms, their love life became an arrangement, well done, great entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
