Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Hot Potato Hand Grenades"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great story. This had me laughing at the antics going on. Very creative story. Well done. I loved the different unusual names for your characters, that was nicely done. I enjoyed reading this, and thought what a good idea that you had for your story. I especially liked the ending of it, that was well done, and cute, about having no one to collect on the grand prize. Nice way to wrap it up. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Great story. This had me laughing at the antics going on. Very creative story. Well done. I loved the different unusual names for your characters, that was nicely done. I enjoyed reading this, and thought what a good idea that you had for your story. I especially liked the ending of it, that was well done, and cute, about having no one to collect on the grand prize. Nice way to wrap it up. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Jacquelyn
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, this was a very interesting way to liven up a ski slope. I found myself not being able to select a villain or a hoped for victor. I don't know if we could say, "Fun was had by all". But . . . I had fun!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Well, this was a very interesting way to liven up a ski slope. I found myself not being able to select a villain or a hoped for victor. I don't know if we could say, "Fun was had by all". But . . . I had fun!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Then we will say that, Dr. Nad.
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And . . . We Did!
Comment from judiverse
This is pretty gruesome. It seems that all the participants who entered met a grim fate. Messing around with hand grenades is not a great idea. I love the names you chose for the participants. With no survivors remaining, there will surely not be another life-or-death contest. You presented the details of passing the grenades and what happened very vividly. judi
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This is pretty gruesome. It seems that all the participants who entered met a grim fate. Messing around with hand grenades is not a great idea. I love the names you chose for the participants. With no survivors remaining, there will surely not be another life-or-death contest. You presented the details of passing the grenades and what happened very vividly. judi
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I think I've got it out of my system.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Carnage on the slopes here with no winners and your riotous game had me bent double with laughter Bill as your tongue in cheek humour came spilling down the mountain like a live bomb, POW and the death of all contestants ensued, a blast of fun was enjoyed by all, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Carnage on the slopes here with no winners and your riotous game had me bent double with laughter Bill as your tongue in cheek humour came spilling down the mountain like a live bomb, POW and the death of all contestants ensued, a blast of fun was enjoyed by all, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for the great review. Bill
